the Goddess Tenebrae has always reincarnated as a human ,but this time something has gone wrong.
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a crossover between my OC world and MLP. more to come
WARNING: ONLY OCs DURING THE PROLOGUE AND FIRST CHAPTER. canon ponies will come in as the story call for it.
WARNING: SOME CURSEING
thank you dad for the editing
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extremly short .. but the idea is good
make longer chapter
I'm digging it... definitely going to track.... Hopefully next chapter isnt so short =D
I'm digging it... definitely going to track.... Hopefully next chapter isnt so short =D
autor used master ball!
wild tenebrae captured!
give tenebrae a nickname?
72116
The next chapter will be at lest 1000 words I promise
P.S. Did You read the Prologue?
72117
nickname given: starlight! Tenebrae now hates you
This story is good so far. It's going to be interesting seeing where you go with this. Will be tracking.
72420
give her a rare cupcake!
by the way, why your replies say a name and link to the comments, while mine are an useless nuber?
74856
cupcake?
I some tomes get the number to
76625
wait, I think half of your answer is missing...
did you said candlejack or applejack or something li-
77462
I asked, what do you mean by this: "give her a rare cupcake! $smiley"
77583
a bad pun for "rare candy" its supposed to raise the pokemon- errr- pony happiness besides a level...
and I syill dont know how to make my 77583 useful...
Longer chapters twice a week would be nice.
It was a short chapter, but it was good anyways
118799
this
i would like weekly chapters
Edit: i just noticed. If they appear every time Tenebrae is in danger of dying and she already killed one of her reincarnation as another incarnation, what happened there? Did they not appear at all? did they appear for both and fought each other? or did they only appear for the one who was attacked first and killed the other one?
Edit2: ok scratch that question i just reread this fic and noticed that you where talking about suicide in the prologe
118799
not really a option now that schools started. this week maybe the chapter will be longer, but till summer or so other school break, once a week is as fast as I can go.
Make longer chapters, they are too short.
Way too short, nothing rly happend.
All these are WAYYYYYYYYYYYY too short.
Get longer chapters if you want more readers,
I MAY track this IF you get longer chapters.