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Lt_Voss


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A mere day has passed since Will and Bill did same before Will's body is laid to rest. Will is then thrust into Erebus, which confuses him for a while, before remembering, with some difficulty, that this was where he was destined to go regardless. A mysterious figure emerges, offering Will the choice to move on straight to the afterlife, or to go back to the living world to perform one simple, not-so-simple task:

Capture escaped souls, evil ghosts, wraiths, haunting spirits, ghouls, ghasts,spectres, shadows, and the like. Simple really. Except he'd get no help from the ponies this time around; he'd have to go back as a wraith.

There is a plus: he's got a few friends whom he can call on to assist him. Though, that is offset by the fact that he's kind of amassed a few enemies in the world of the dead. He's going to have a very difficult time getting rid of these dead without much help. Essentially, it'd be another Thursday were he alive.

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Released two chapters because the rules for posting a story on here are that the story must contain relevant pony information from the get-go, and that I could not say that it would "come later," but had to release the store "later." So here you go. Two chapters.

Fallen Angels... a story idea I've had for quite a long time since finishing Broken Wings. Tell me how you guys like it, how it possibly compares to its predecessor, and so on. Hope you guys enjoy!

Oh dear, Will. What have you gotten yourself into?


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1) this is an interestingly good story :rainbowdetermined2: and 2) It's somewhat understandable that Silver Star is able to talk with spirits because, the fact that she was possessed for a long period of time, a year or 2 or months, could probably be considered as a near-death situation in some cases.

1307500 Didn't realize I was popular enough to receive spam bots! I'm moving up in the world!

I've been trying to figure out where I've heard your name before, and now I know. QUAKE IV FTW!

1323775 :pinkiehappy:

Don't really play that much anymore, but Lt. Voss, for some reason, just stuck with me as my username/ID name for pretty much every site and game I visit/play, respectively.

Oh dear. Looks like we have a few grudges... town of friendship and welcome, indeed!

Oh, and a skeptic. How wonderful. Probably hurts Will's ego right there knowing Twilight doesn't even think he exists anymore. Ouch.

Hope you enjoy this chapter!

So I thought I'd work on releasing chapters at the rate I used to for Broken Wings. I hope this chapter and the one before it weren't chock full of mistakes, both grammatical and continuital. Let me know if you see anything.

Okay! Well, this is heart-warming OH GOD WHY.

Poor Will. Guess we'll just have to see how this plays out, don't we? Let me know what you think, and even give me some of your own ideas! I want to see what you guys could come up with. If I really like it and I feel it'll add to the story (as opposed to detract or make it less engaging), I'll put in your ideas in a later chapter! I really wanna hear from my (albeit small) fanbase! I've been getting lonely here and I've begun to think you guys have lost interest.

But to hopefully fix that, I'm working on the story! I've allocated time from 11:00 pm EST to 12:00 am and some times from 10:00 pm to 12:00 am to work on this story, so I hope to see interest in this story pick right back up from where it left off!

So, Will. Finding out that things aren't exactly as they seem, I see. I guess you didn't really learn that fact when you were alive, but then learning it now is rather dangerous. Oh well.

Let me know what you think! Your comments and questions (however sparse, few, or irrelevant) do really help me. I appreciate them all. Have a nice (day/night) guys. (Circle one)

Is this....a sequel?.....Oh god, I'm literally crying right now....:pinkiesad2:

1747288>>1747318 Yes, this is a sequel. I take it by your tears you are happy? I'm happy too, that you like it! And thank you, for commenting!

1747339 DUUUUde. I've been waiting for this for so long. I was here at chapter 2 of Broken wings! :pinkiecrazy: Twas a crazy ride....but...the ending.....I thought it was the real ending, but this is much better!:pinkiehappy:

1747353 Glad you're so enthusiastic! Go tell your friends (if that's okay with you :fluttershyouch:) about it, I'd like to have a few people telling me how the story's doing (goods and bads, errors, etc)!

Also, I really appreciate your comments; I really do. :pinkiesad2: For some reason, a lot of my followers stopped commenting...

P.S. I know I just released Chapter 7, but I'm working on 8 right now.

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1747413 wow...did you know, the only reason I discovered pony music was the preformance chapter of Broken Wings? Dude, why the HeEEEeeeeEEEEell did you kill off the best characters?

1747440 Why, whatever do you mean? :ajsmug:

*totally not foreshadowing in ANY way at all whatsoever*

1747464 ....Hey dude? I'm not self advertising here, but do you need a proofreader? :duck:

1747469 Perhaps, perhaps not. I'll see later on. If I get to a chapter that simply feels to me like it is absolutely terrible or rushed or full of mistakes or whatever, even if it isn't, I could run it by you first. Consider yourself my (sometimes) proofreader/editor. :pinkiesmile:

Well....If you let me proofread the story, you get a spot on my page for stories that I'm proofreading...not that I have more than two followers....:ajbemused: Oh well...I fond an error in one of the chapters, but my crazed reading made me say, "I'll go back and tell him later."
And now I forget what it was....Do you use google docs? It's the best, because I could proofread while you write...

1753064 Dunno. I got downvotes even before the story got any views. I'm guessing because there's the "Human" tag.

1753468 Goddamit. The story Imma be posting soon will probably get the same....So any thoughts on my offer yet? (Impatient Nemo is impatient.)

1753481 Still not done with Chapter 8. Can't proofread what I haven't done myself :applejackunsure:

Two new chapters for you all!

Oh dear... just what the heck is going on? Why can't anyone give any straight answers? Poor Will.

Hope you all enjoy!

I was gonna post a happy comment about how this updated, but then I read the last line. :ajbemused: Fuck.

Well, this chapter changed absolutely everything I ever knew about anything. I realixe with a great amount of sadness that I'm the only one who is commenting.:fluttercry:

Sorry it took this long to release a simple interlude, but I hope you can find the same amount of enjoyment in it as you do my other chapters.

1797443 I have no idea whether or not that is a complement or criticism, so I'll just take a chance and assume it's a complement.

Thank you!

Good,good, even though I am very confuddle...

2099370 Wait til you see him drink!

Crap, gave too much away. Don't worry, readers. Crack teams are being sent to... retrieve you. Thank you.

As a member of the internet it is my civic duty to do this first!:pinkiecrazy:

Now onto business. AWESOME!:rainbowdetermined2:

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