• Member Since 15th Feb, 2014
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Loud_Taffy


Writer, editor, composer, musician, brony, I'm in it for the awesome!

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Melony is a young woman of poor circumstances. When she finds herself in a new world of opportunity and prosperity, she can barely contain her joy. Join her and her friends in a tail that will show just how good life can get when given a chance.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

Next chapter please!!! I can't wait to read what happens.

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Will prob have it ready by Monday or Tuesday.

6211267 Nothing, this was just unexpected I guess. Although the fact that the cannons fired when she said fire was a bit odd.

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I'll end up explaining away the cannon thing later on, (as soon as I think of something lol). But I'm curious, what was so unexpected? If you don't mind me asking?

You had my curiosity. Now you have my attention. I shall track this.

Good story so far. Wish the chapters were longer though.

Hmm... not bad, pretty interesting to say the least. I'll follow along.:twilightsmile:

starting to re wright ch.2 in order to make sense of the overall arching story.

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