Imagine if your unique talent in life was to be able to travel. To soar far and wide across Equestria, knowing exactly where to go and how to get there in order to see the most beautiful sights and meet the most amazing ponies.
Now imagine a cold, dark prison cell. Walls enclosing you on every side, and four long years standing between you and ever feeling the open sky beneath your wings again. For most Pegasii, this would be a nightmare. For Free Bird, it's now a horrifying reality.
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6153801 Aww, thanks! :3 I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as it updates over the week. <3
Applejack ain't gonna like that idea
"Of course, there's the third option of just holding the sun in place until he gets his beak out of his ass, but that's only if the lying doesn't work."
6157375 No one ever thinks of that, Celestia controls the sun. If a nation were to declare war, she could just move the sun closer to the enemies lands and cause drought, famine and mass death at the flick of her horn.
6159764 XD True, but wouldn't that just make her enemies flee to other lands, where innocent ponies might get hurt/killed? I think that'd stop her from doing something like that, even if it seemed 'necessary'. o.o
6159786 Yeah, they'd flee into other lands, malnourished and near death. They probably wouldn't last long in a fight tbh.
Plus Luna, the dreamwalker, could give them all crippling insomnia.
6159791 ;-; One would hope it wouldn't come to that!
Why does this only have five likes?
HERESY!!!
6163812 I think it just got a bit buried amongst other stuff. Unfortunate, as I am really proud of this little series! But so long as those who have read it enjoy it, I'm still happy. :)
6163954 This seriously needs more views
6163989 Well, if you know anyone else you think would enjoy it, please feel free to send them this way. XD I'm eager to post more stories and would love it if there were more folks to read them. :3
6164008 I'm quite the loner on Fimfic, buuut I can put this into a few groups and see if that brings a bit more attention to this!
I also look forward to more :0
6164015 I hope you'll enjoy my future content. I try to balance myself between more show-themed sweet/bittersweet stuff like this, and a bit of shameless clop every now and then. XD
6164024 I look forward to seeing it!
Nice. The only issue I have is with chapter one. She seemed to open up and dump exposition on Shiny too quickly. Not terrible, but it felt a bit rush. Honestly I'm just nitpicking in order to justify the first word of this comment.
6210921 A fair critique, I'll keep it in mind! :3 Thanks for the feedback. :)
Dear Lord, this was awesome. And deserves more attention.