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Fire.
It destroyed everything I loved.
There is a fire is in the middle of Ponyville. Rainbow Dash flies into action to save a innocent pony trapped inside. But when she finds out there is another pony trapped inside as well, Rainbow Dash's love, Fluttershy, decides to take her place. Rainbow can only watch as the yellow pegasus tries to be a hero.
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This is a wonderful, heartwarming and beautiful story. I'm actually crying....
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Thank you.
My heart hurts now.....I don't know if I could do this. I'm just gonna go lay down now....
Great story but I'm kinda confused.
Great though
6171564 This story could use a little more spit 'n' polish. I'm just not feeling the emotional impact of someone who is deeply cared for/loved dying. I think this has to do with a lack of memories and not having a sense of 'history' together. We don't visit Rainbow Dash's memories, There's no recounting of memories at a wake to help with the mourning process and provide a sense of impact and loss that Fluttershy had on the lives of ponies or get a sense of the loss of Kindness. She doesn't even record the memories she has with Fluttershy in a memorial journal.
This feels like it happened to two acquaintances, rather than best friends. We don't see Rainbow Dash in shock or grief. It even seems as though she's moved on with living her life, without any explanation as to why she was able to do so. But I think not including memories of the times that Rainbow spent with Fluttershy really hurt the emotional impact that this story might have had.