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Rainbow Dash is bae.

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After a dare devil stunt goes horribly wrong, Rainbow Dash starts to loose her memory. She cannot remember how she failed the stunt. All she remembers is how she lost her desire to be a Wonderbolt and how she wishes she never had her wings.

This is the struggle she goes through almost every day of her life.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 20 )

This hurt my poor little heart...but I loved it. :fluttercry:

This was. .. is really good.

It's like a real accident occurred and she has TBI, traumatic brain injury.

Honestly I do think this should go somewhere in the effect she has an injury, physically, that she forgets about.

Other than that I'm gonna watch where you and this unique style takes us.

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Thank you. :twilightsmile: Nice to know that my story is believable.

I might write another small squeal to this, but I don't know if i would write it in this style again.

The premise alone hits me right in the feels. *comforts Dashie* :fluttercry:

you need to add how she feels about rarity, pinkie and scootalo

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I was going to, but I couldn't come up with anything thing good. :ajsleepy:

Comment posted by Patchwork_ deleted Jun 19th, 2015

I don't know what to say...
I loved the story, the way it was written, and the flow. The only real problem is that it left me wanting to read more about it. And that is both a good and bad thing due to the fact that it's marked as complete.

I feel the story could have more, however it is the writers pen that is in control, and we are along for the adventure. Overall Loved the story and great job. I will definitely be following your work here.

I do not see a derpy pony.
I see Derpy, a pony.
One day I will figure out how to put a sig on fimfic.

Wow, this' great. I hope you know at some point in the future I'm going to use this as inspiration.

I really really feel like you have somthing here.
It was so good, and somewhat depressing.
Can wait for a sequel, if their is one!

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Thankies!

I'm not sure about a sequel, but there is a possibility of another chapter.
I have it marked as complete because I'm not sure if it needs another chapter yet. So for now, I'm leaving at it is.

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

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I've never really been on the site but I'll check it out. Thanks!

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Ah, thank you. :twilightsheepish:
I was actually really nearvous about posting it because it was all background info and I was worried it would be really boring......

I love it. It's hopeful. It's inspiring, that she's still in there, but is lost, and ...
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Oh gosh I got the chills just now, the possibilities.

I'm guessing something happened to her head. She must fly in the end.

I am very sad because this has not been updated.

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