After Sombra is defeated, his hatred is transmitted into Princess Celestia. It takes a hold of her and drives her into a power crazed madness. She manages to corrupt Rainbow Dash and in doing so reeks havoc on Equestria. Will the Main Six be able to defeat Queen Celestia before it's too late?
Rated teen due to language.
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Interesting title...
Mhmm. Okay so when I looked at the word count of your chapters that's where you lost me. Each chapter, except two, is under 900-1,000 words. For a story like this, I would say it is unacceptable.
Everything shouldn't be in italics.
6020875 It's in italics because it's a flash back.
Thank you for writing this! I can't wait till it's finished
6022961 Ah, it might be a looooong while before it's finished, so i hope you're willing to wait.
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I'll wait! But as long as there's good content ahead! 
W-where's the next chapter?
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It's coming, but not for a while. I've run dry on ideas for this currently.
Next one?
New chapter?