• Published 24th Jun 2015
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Your Human and You: Twisted Product - MonolithiuM



In a world where humans are stupid animals, what happens when a murderous, evil man becomes woven into the fabric of pony society? A dumb animal, with the precise and vicious mind of a practiced serial killer.

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9971647
best way in my opinion would be a knife, or perhaps poison, second one NO ONE will guess it was a human, the first one, people can assume humans are dumb, but I doubt they don't pick up sharp shit sometimes, after all in the main story they trained humans to use pickaxes to mine

wow that is something

I'm so glad this is back!

Ey, I hope we see more soon

9096956
Sooo …. Soon means about 2 years b0ss

:O it's back! Yey

This one goes out to Rhombicosidodecahedron.

Oh, you honor me so :twilightsheepish:


Oooh, delightfully devilish
Wonderful little flames, eager for the taste of flesh

Not much to say
Came for the unique premise, stayed for the fun little murders
And murder our good friend has
How wonderful



Yknow it's funny
I just threw this into my rip shelf a couple days ago
Timing, huh? Glad I can take that right back out

Let us hope for a shorter wait for chapter 7 or something lol

The basement was quiet. Quiet like the instant after a hitched breath. Ignoring the usual saying, it was a silence suffused with life. Stillness was like a creature here: it wound through the decrepit, dark halls with the quick patches of drywall and half-finished carpeting. Slither did the silence around hooves, talons, and paws, curling around their ankles with every step and swinging movement.

The quiet knew them.

It had expected them.

It expected to consume them.

And that's when this fic went from good to great.

The one thing I would like to see as this story progresses is some backstory to the human character. Are there reasons he is this way? Why does he kill? I like stuff like that.

HOLY SHIT ITS BACK BOIS

forgot how much i missed this

Altered some tags. Removed Luna as the story is shifting direction. Added the “Violence” and “Death” tags, obviously. New blog post up for you guys.

hell that was intense:rainbowderp: ... I like it!
good story so far, waiting for the next chapter!!:raritystarry:

Finally some good fuckin chapters

DF

Well, this is certainly interesting.

Eyy, that's pretty good.

Another masterfully crafted chapter.

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