Through these crooked eyes, I can see through your disguise.
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Symphony
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So, this is when I hide beneath my bed and cover my ears, waiting for the storm to blow over, right?
Saaaaad We Don't Like Saaad
I spotted a few areas where shorter sentences would have a stronger effect.
Other than that, this was very good.
I particularly like the poem structure spliced into the story.
More dark then sad...
And Dash might be a jerk at times but you've made her WAY meaner then she is... and I don't like that, through the story cocept is good.
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Changed the tag.
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just thought i'd let you know
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I wonder what other Bronies might say about the change.
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They can say mostly whatever they want, but I as the author changed the tag so it would fit better to the fic itself.
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Though it could seem to be done because of the comments of a few.
Huh... Coincidence that TFK's "Step To Me" played as I read?
Bullies suck. Unfortunately, some people will crack and kill or at least lose it under the pressure. You never know who will.
I can't say I liked nor disliked this, nor can I favourite it.
It's a good piece of literature, anyway.
Wow. I give thumbs up and smiling pinkie
. Derpy givin some payback baby!!!!
So...
becomes 
, and kills those who made fun of her, save for 
, who now looks like 
.
I like it. FAV FOR YOU!
Dislike on the simple fact that you've changed Derpy's personality to an extent that is no longer believable. Derpy going all RAGE MODE on other ponies? Sorry, she's too good for that.