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Garfield23
Well I'm Garfield23 and I'm another Scottish Brony. Writing stories is one of my favourite hobbies.
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Too many tags turn some people off. And I mean story tags, not character tags. Random and Adventure tend to not go together, as far as I know. But I will give this a try after I get home.
6244245 Okay I'll take down a few. I'm just never certain which category my stories belong in.
6244508 It's okay, a lot of people don't. Hell, there's even times when I don't know what I should put. But also, thnks for taking it so well, I was worried you'd get mad.
6244890 Feedback is feedback. I don't get mad except at Rangers Fc but that's because I'm Scottish and an idiot. Just a quick question how was your read of the story?
6244925 Have yet to read it, I feel like such a butt lol
I've been trying to get one of mine finished, and motivation has just now hit me after not having it for 3 months.
But I'll read it after I post this comment.
Alrighty! After reading, I need to ask: did you have an editor? I was going to suggest a couple things concerning writing the characters, but then I saw the author's note. We've all been there.
If you want, I can go through this and put in all the missing periods and fix misspelled words?
6244990 No, I don't have an editor but if you would be willing that would be a massive help.
This was dull.
7869170 Yeah. Thanks.
I like this, could use a little tightening up, maybe just a little more detail and exploration of both mares feelings and thoughts, but it's very good.
8000575 Thank you for the kind comments.
Treehugger has a C. Tag now.