• Published 30th May 2015
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(Flutterdash) The Whole Story - MagnoliaThourns



The whole story of Fluttershy and Rainbow's love. Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have been dating for a year, and are finally ready to come out to their friends and family. Things go roughly, and the whole town gets involved.

Comments ( 23 )
Comment posted by There At The Close deleted May 30th, 2015

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I almost almost included the wedding. I don't think it interested me enough at the time, but looking back I do wish I had written it. Oh well, maybe next time :)

Dang it. I was really liking this fic for its uniqueness and directions, but everything started falling apart after chapter 8...

As much as I'm a fan of the idea of Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash having foals together, I'm not sure how I feel about it being a colt. Even with the 'gift' Discord gave her (thank you, by the way for making him a FlutterDash supporter), Rainbow Dash was still technically a mare, so why did her genetic material contain Y chromosomes?

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I thought you said this would be your only story? Anyway, I'm currently coming up with a FlutterDash wedding story which, ironically, has issues you presented in this story, albeit tamer, such as Applejack supporting them from the beginning.

First of all: AMAZING. I loved this fic thoroughly. I stayed up until 3 in the morning reading it. I loved the conflict and tension. How people would normally react to a gay couple. Some approving, some not so much. I especially enjoyed the conflict within the mane 6 itself, with AJ being a homophobic bitch, but eventually redeeming herself in the end. I love how this fic covers many of the problems with today's society and the issue of same-sex couples (segregation, hostility, etc.) The romantic parts made me feel all fuzzy inside. There were a few grammar/spelling issues, but those can be overlooked. Amazing work, bruh. /) :heart::pinkiehappy:

This fic was excellent! I enjoyed the ride, each chapter making me want to read the next one. The characters were presented well and the interactions were great! Lots of cute too! Sure it has grammar issues, but there wasn't anything big enough to detract me from the story. Very good!

On another note, I am glad you were able to come to terms with yourself, especially with religion involved. I grew up in a super Christian household and environment, and that was definitely a big hurdle for me when I discovered I was pansexual. But like yourself I prayed on it and did some research, and everything turned out alright. Contest to popular belief it is entirely possible to be Christian and have different sexualities. God's love is infinite and I'm glad you found your way!

Keep up the good writing, whether it is pony or not! And keep keeping your chin up with life, you are good people! :raritywink:

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I figured it's Discord, so anything goes. He probably (if we want to take the magic out of it) synthesized a Y chromosome out of her parent's DNA and used that. (Or would the Y chromosome have to come from both parents? I don't think so; sorry, it's been a while since biology class.)

Also I thought it would be cute to have both of them raise a boy, so, that's really why I did it.

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Keep up the good writing, whether it is pony or not! And keep keeping your chin up with life, you are good people!

Thanks so much! I'm going to try to keep writing, and maybe one day I'll get a book out :twilightsmile:

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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :rainbowkiss:

its not often I follow someone from just the work of one story, but I think you're one worth following :pinkiehappy: even if you only ever release the one story.

Minor point... Dash and Fluttershy could only have a filly due to the issue of genetics.

I like stories where I can see parts of the author in their work. and I'm sure I could see parts of you in this. It usually makes the story stronger when the author has such ties to what they write. Although I don't agree with a some of the things in this story, it was engaging and its nice to see a story that covers what happens once they are together. I also would have liked to see some TwiLuna backing up the Flutterdash in the conflict but at I'm happy enough with Twilight and Luna simply getting to have some alone time.

The real feeling conflicts between the ponies was great. I thing AJ really would take it about as hard as she did in this story (although perhaps a bit more denial first before tearing the couple to shreds..?)

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Thanks so much for the follow! :twilightsmile: Ever putting more fanfiction up? I am getting tempted.

I'm glad you like it, and it means a lot to me that you finished it. It was born out of parts of me (especially at the time), and my want to see Flutterdash after they had gotten together. As for Twiluna? I have to admit I don't ship it. :duck: Though I have nothing against it like I do for appledash. Maybe I'll give a Twiluna fic a try. And yeah, AJ's reaction was paced badly.

Anyway, thanks for reading it!

You know I read this story over and over again and think, why can't every Fanfic be this well written?! It shows the ups and downs of Flutterdash and the struggles they faced to be accepted it was a roller coaster of emotions! Oh the feels! There were tons of them. You captured the characters personalities spot on, with Fluttershy putting her happiness before others and Dashes loyalty. Amazing. And it isn't the common road to acceptance! Most fanfics don't tell a story of how they came out or how the other reacted to the news but they have this little fantasy that everyone accepts them as a couple. But you showed the reality that not everyone is always so accepting and to incorporate reality in a fanfic is hard to do but you did it! Again Amazing Work!!! It also shows the good and bad of our society toward same sex relationships. Bravo! I hope you do more fanfics because this was "Awesome". It really is a shame that this story doesn't have over 100 likes already. Truly disappointing for such great work.

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Thank you so much! It really does mean a lot to me, that you like it so much and that you commented :heart:. All I can say is thank you! :twilightblush:

An excellent read, story deserves far more attention then it got.

10/10 will read again but one thing can you make a sequel PLEASE?

This is easily one of the most memorable FlutterDash fics I have ever read, and I say that after reading through the whole thing for the second time.

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Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

First things first: HOW THE HECK DID I MISS THIS FANFIC
Secondly: I am favoriting this to heck and back. Third: why do all the good ones happen to be the author's last birth before they depart to other pastures? I am le sadd now...

THIS WAS SUCH A GOOD READ!
Thanks for making this, author!!!

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"le sad"
thank you- this has blessed my eyes

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