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UltimateDemonBeast65
Casual MLP fan. I'm hoping to maybe make a return. Novice voice actor
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I am interested in seeing where this particular story will go and have high hopes for it. also a editor or prereader would probably do some good such as
will be totally, more difficult.
The Ted Bundy quote earns you a like on the other hand cant fault good taste in quotes. Its also what made me read this.
Yeah I only typed with my index fingers which is why some of the writing might be messy. The Ted Bundy Quote when I found it I fought was perfect for my story because the quote really does describe my character's characteristics and so on.
I hope you guys like this better than my original fanfic because that one blew up in flames but not to worry I won't make the same mistake twice.
Oh, hey. This guy's back. Will be watching.
Chapter3 I love this story
A serious improvement. Good job.
That was a good Chapter can't wait for the Next one
This story is a change of pace of what im usually reading.
i dont usually read story in equestria girls universe but Meh
There a start for everything and its actually nice to read.
So keep on the good work
Thank you MLPDOVAPONY53 for convincing me not to give up and thank you other people for giving me one last shot. If any of you guys have any suggestions for future developments for me then message me or add something on my profile
KO when's the next chapter I want to see the former killer of peace Reyals Nik in Canterlot High.
6369649
He's already there but you probably mean something else.
Don't worry, the next chapter will be released either tomorrow or the next day, I promise you that
KO understand hope he use all the strength and skills to be use for good.
When will chapter four be out
6380093 Soon just be patient. I have school and a drama production to do so I'll uploaded around that time.
Okay ill be waiting for the chapter
for now its going nice and smoothly.
i like it
Its not just a.
"Yo i'm someone you don't know,want to be friends"
Mane six say"Fuck yeah"
Sunset shimmer"you know in reality i was born in a pony world full of magic"
"Holy shit thats awesome"
"Now lets take you to equestria for no reason at all"
MAGIIIIIIIIC!!!!!!
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Kind of story.
at least it think so.
And he didn't start to kill everybody for no other reason than the author sadistic fantasy
So that good
anyway
keep on the good work
6386005 The idea of the story is a youth troubled by his past of murder and must learn to fit in with society to become a normal teenager. However because of the injustice he sees in the world like when Thunder Jockey is bullying the Crusaders, it causes him to become enraged and attack the perpetrator in anger but is trying to restrain himself because he cannot afford to try and kill otherwise he will go to prison and be incarcerated for life (Yes his murders were that bad). So basically the idea is can a former serial killer be a normal person or not?
Also another note is how he call Equestria gay and stuff is because he is a believer of life on other planets and plus states that there is scientific explanation for everything. Do I have the same beliefs? Yes I do but I still think some forms of magic exists to a point.
6386213 i know and that why i like it
Your story have more content than just a serial killer killing all the mane six just for the fuck of it or stories where the guy just *pop*
Make friend with the mane 6,go to equestria,learn about the magic of friendship and become an almighty god in the two first chapter that all the girls want to fuck with.OR those fast paced stories that i hate so much
Like we sadly see in 3/4 of fanfics on this site
Your character have more to him than those bad protagonist.
We can see he is not totally sure he can make it but still want to.
He didn't become a god-like human in not even 4 chapters like (again) we see a lot of time in other stories
We have time to understand what is happening with your protagonist rather than trying to understand a bunch of scribbles.
So yea,what i'm trying to say is...your story is good
6386213 KO when will the next chapter come?
6531345 I will do the next chapter when I can. I've been busy with school work and on the holidays I did an acting course so be patient and I will write it soon
6553913 KO awesome hope there'll be some action soon too.
6553927 Oh there will be
Update?