The story of a pony that is more than what he seems. Only wanting a place to call home, he heads towards Ponyville in the hopes of finding one. Not knowing what he'll find, his life is turned upside down as happy reunions, crazy shinanigans, and a certain Princess change in his future. What will happen, no one knows.
Authors note: chapters will vary in lenght.
Hmm... Dragon pony eh? Not the normal story type, but this could get interesting... I'll stick with this!
I went back through and didn't notice any spelling or grammatical errors, so that's a big helper! You more then likely get a lot better rating with good grammar and spelling.
One more thing, If you ever need help on anything, whether it's a tip to filler content, spelling help, or proofreader, I will be here to gladly help!
Finial note: I saw Tatsurou mention this story in his blog post, so you can thank him for referring me to you!
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Exactly why I came here as well. So far, I am intrigued, and will also keep an eye on this story. It's been a while since I've been wanting to follow a story at all, and this story is certainly worth following.
I hope to see more!
A vary interesting start. your story is looking good right now and I am more then willing to watch for more.
keep up the good work.
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Spike was so sharp and smart, identifying a dragon like that.
Pinkie not having commas really shows her excitement.
At first I saw errors, but now they seem perfectly in character for these two.
Just a few things:
Had had for lunch
only items: a small travelling case and a rather large satchel holding his personal fund within.
Thank you for entertaining me.
Wildfire's a dracony, pongon or longma as named from different parts of Equestria.
A pony dragon combination?
Why yes.
cool
Spike! don't get any ideas buster!
Yikes!!!!!!
Rarity what are you doing?
Dibs!
I need brain bleach !
I need a private room wowser
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lol thats just too funny
When's the next chapter?
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Im currently working on it. hopefully it I'll have it finish sooner rather than later
A wut of me?
A naked you
honest It's not my fault !
Come here dragon boy
I'm so dead.
not yet you are
this story is looking interesting. I will be keeping a eye on your work Dragonzero77 ..
Harts Fire
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thank you! I just really hope more poeple will like the story, and oh the things I have in plan for wildfire. If only I can draw what he looks like Im not very good at digital art, i lack the physical tools needed to really draw on the computer, trust me i've tried.
a vary good chapter I love how you put it all together it flows really well.
and now with cadence on the job this is going to get good.
Harts Fire
Nice update
a strange little chapter interesting but strange.
what are they not telling Wildfire Twilight was blushing.
It's official Pinkie is shipping.