Secrets of the Sun

While Celestia is away for royal duties, Discord manages to find her more personal diary, and decides to read it out loud to Luna. From encounters with hydras to pranks pulled on twilight for fun, to the shocking truth about her past, the Sun princess has a lot of fun stories to tell.
This is just a fic that I created for fun, I'll see where this goes, but don't expect quick updates. Writing is hard

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: Prologue · 5th Jun 2015 · 714 words
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Chapter 2: What Have We Here · 30th Aug 2015 · 915 words
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Chapter 3: A Baby Moon · 14th Mar 2016 · 570 words
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Darkie 09

Darkie 09 #1 · Dec 4th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: What Have We Here ·

I love it! Just one thing..... Celestia, it was stated in The Journal Of the 2 Sisters that BOTH Celestia and Luna went to Star Swirl the Beraded's library. ALL the time and Star Swirl would teach Celestia and Luna spells. They were in fact very interested in Star Swirls Library. Just thought I'd let you know because that confused me a bit. I like it otherwise. It's just that. Also the grammar. I can help with that if you'd like.

sakuralovelight

sakuralovelight #2 · Dec 4th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: What Have We Here ·

Lol love it hope to read more soon.

nothing_to_see_here

nothing_to_see_here #3 · Dec 4th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: What Have We Here ·

I like it. Should be fun once we get further in, just don't rush it, nothing good ever comes out of rushing things.

moonrose

moonrose #4 · Dec 4th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: What Have We Here ·

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That why there's an alternate universe tag

moonrose

moonrose #5 · Dec 4th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: What Have We Here ·

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Yay thank you!!

nebulaegalaxy

nebulaegalaxy #6 · Dec 4th, 2015 · 2 · · Chapter 2: What Have We Here ·

I'm not very good at writing

Don't worry, neither am I.

NeverEatTheLemonsAlone

NeverEatTheLemonsAlone #7 · Dec 11th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: What Have We Here ·

Ah, the old "I'm not good at writing" self-doubt virus...Don't worry about it. You're fine, and I quite enjoyed this story. There are a few minor grammatical and mechanical hiccups—commas placement, quote punctuation—but other than that, a nice enjoyable read. Keep at it!

moonrose