Just a normal dude who loves making fics
Sent to Equestria by a creepy merchant guy from RE4. That sucked a lot. Now me and my friends are in the world of Equestria which is full of racist ponies and the Princesses are after us due to our appearance. Well I have something to say to them. BITE MY SHINY METAL ASS PONIES! Oh and we work for the Griffon Republic.
Note: This story will have griffons with advance tech.
Rated teen for language and violence.
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I love it man can't wait to read the next chapter
this story's got me laughing hard, I love it.
You seriously want to work on your grammar, maybe get an editor, and some of the MLP characters are OOC, even for this genre. Otherwise, looks pretty good.
More, these zukas seem like good guys.
It's time for the Zaku Zaku hour!
You should probably add Nogla as the janitor of their base.
I got a question, at the beginning of the story, you wrote the zaku's being impervious to magic but they still got affected by magical blasts? And shouldn't the arachnoids be at a disadvantage here?
Sounds like you kinda nerfed them
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Well the Elfen Spiders also use weapons which requires physical strength to fight against magic impervious opponents.
5990741 but they're ZAKUs, even if they're human sized they've got plasma weapons, advanced armour, high caliber guns and rocket launchers capable of bringing a city down... Well, when you put it THAT way, no wonder you needed them, Equestrian would have been TOASTED! You've got to explain why the Griffins have high tech though
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Its Vanoss and the gang.
Dem references. When will we see a janitor Nogla?
That... entire thing went the wrong way in my head on so many levels...
I have a question that could be answered on the description. How do the Zaku compare in size to the ponies? Are they man sized, or are they properly Zaku sized? I ask, because it's not obvious because the size of the throne room is big enough for at least three Zaku to stand on top of each other. Also, it bugs me that right from the start here they can go toe to hoof against the princesses and not suffer more than surface damage. Also, you shot your self in the foot by making their armor effectively the end all, be all for rare material turned to defensive protection. So, effectively, there is no threat that can actually hurt them, so they have no reason to improve, which means you made a static target for the ponies to fail to reach with no chance of character development. You did worse to your characters, than the one gundam crossover that is worthy of the title on this site despite its atrocious grammar. I couldn't finish reading that story because the grammar was so bad, but I applauded the writing of the story and the character displayed. This makes me want to go back and watch Mobile Suit Gundam for the sake of early Heero.
Yes it's about time racist Celestial gets owned in combat.
I feal sorry for anything that serena sees as a threat.
Such horrible grammar. Please get a bloody editor!
I NEEDZ A NEW UPDATE!! I simply love this story
This story is awesome when is the next chapter coming out?
All of vanoses crew is here
IT'S VANOSSGAMING'S CREW!
Wish I could like this more, and finally racist ponies got what coming to them. Thanks man/girl.
off season
The vanoss crew i like it
Wow you included a clip of the 2003 clone wars I have a figure of the blue ark trooper from 2003.
Memes THE MEMES ARE EVERYWHERE REPENT REPENT!
Lol a War Hamer 40k reference.
Is that another version of FUCKING DERPY?
Good story, would like to see it finished eventually.
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So? Would still like to see it finished at some point, even if I have to wait awhile.