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With that ending, I just had to.
Moral...
Moral.......
Moral highground!!!!
I get it!!
That last line. I really want to know if he's joking or not and if not im really want to know whats up with that spider.
Oh hell. Maurice, you've been bugged. By Batmare.
Maybe it was a magic spider who just wants to gather up some bros and have a fun pool party!
Dat spider dough 8'D
hahahahah xD Nice man, nice.
Let me guess Scary is going to make a new appearance soon.
6543926 "It's over Maurice! I am the Highground!"
6544272 "You underestimate my Power"
I can sorta understand Octavias dad, wanting grandchildren to spoil rotten.
Also, makes me wonder who did pop Octavias Cherry, and if that's any relation to her not wanting to get down and Dirty with her current boyfriend.
Wow... Octavia's father, Speakeasy, is actually a pretty swell guy. Kinda like "crime lords" like him and hopefully he stays relatively friendly throughout the story.
Liking this story a lot! I can't wait to see the Mother's talk with Maurice next.
6544272 give this guy a cookie! !
Any man or woman who uses Seinfeld references is alright by me.
I believe you were looking for "expendable."
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Next we get to hear Highground's side of the story.
Fair dinkum?
You made me get through that whole flamin' chapter to get to the Spider bro reference. Dick move mate, dick move. It's the only reason I'm reading this drivel.
Forgive me, I cant back that up.
I was really hangin' out for this chapter after that flamin' bombshell of an ending to the previous. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I thought the background for Speakeasy was very well written. It was an extremely plausible personal reasoning for his actions towards Maurice. Being a father, I'll probably be the same way. (pity my daughter's first boyfriend, (or girlfriend, I'm an equal opportunity overprotective father)) I'm now waiting with baited breath for Moral's "words of encouragement" regarding their relationship.
Keep up the great work.
You have mates,
PhucknuckL
P.S. I love the little Moondancer back story, that was an unexpected yet lovely little touch.
6544342 "Don't try it..."
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Fixed it!
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Didn't hint that it was from Southpark, and I know fully well it's from Freaks...my little peacock...
Yea new chapter.
You keep putting 'trail' where you mean to put 'trial'.;) Just a minor correction. Now, back to reading the amazing chapter.^^
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Fixed it!
6545593 lol Good to hear. Still slowly readin' through it. Lots to multi-task with today. XD
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Huh, coulda sworn that guy built it.
I remember the Frizz saying at one point 'He's the guy who BUILT the bus!' or... something. Memory's a bit fuzzy I guess.
Also sweet Jesus titty cinnamon, Dread Pirate Frizzle has to be the greatest thing I've ever even heard of. I feel like my life quality's improved just knowing she descended from... frigging Redbeard?! THIS GUY?!
...I... don't even... what?
Amazing chapter, I got to say. Well done.:D
Cheeks are running down my tears !! Or the opposite, I don't care !!!
That chapter is... Fucking emotive and fun all at once ! There is revelation and... And... *sob* it is so much intense to see Octi coming in like that !
It lacks clop but... But that chapter is perfect ! It just worth the time waiting for it !
Marry me, and I'll show you the Eiffel tower ! 8D
I love it, this was a grate chapter
what?
stayclassy
Art Vandelay huh? So what does he import?
And woh... scary's friend ISN'T working for SPeakeasy?! What the heck is going on!?
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6547864 WOO!
Is It Just me? or That Speakeasy and Moral Highground are Similar/alternate version of Sly Cooper and Carmelite Fox?
What chapter was this..?
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At the very end of 'I Should Start Charging Rent For Use Of My Dream Space'
6548037 Oh, thanks!
"I never called called them out on them" used call twice.
"Octavia and him actually dated before for a short time, but for some reason, she cut if off with him." used if instead of it.
Besides that I have one word, Damn. I love this story and the way it's going, by far the favorite on my favorites list so far, keep it up.
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Thank you for spotting those, correcting.
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Probably you, because I've never played Sly Cooper.
Wow this is an odd story at times.
I had to re-read chapter 7 just to get that reference. Damn how could i forget that one about the spider
I have a feeling that spider either belongs to Moral, or is Scary from the "Fleeting Flames" story.
Ooww this was great very good back story for the farther. Hm now the mom that will be a good one as well. It was a great chapter good work.
Keep being awesome.
Dude you shuld write a story about that spider.
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Can't, spider belongs to Pusspuss
6549231 It is Scary. But like the author said he is from Pusspuss's story called Bon Bon's Acceptance, which like this story is a great read and you should check it out if you haven't.
I'm assuming Enigmatic and Duelist use him as a tip of the cap to Pusspuss, because let's face it, Scary is pretty awesome.
Anywho, another great chapter. I'm looking forward to when all three of them get together. At least, that's what I'm hoping for.
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Scary is best spider bro!
So why exactly would he be, after that response? If anyone I was seeing gave me that many lies and then that kind of contemptuously dismissive answer when I called them out on it, I'd be kicking their ass to the curb faster than they could blink. With that little respect to it, I don't know if you even can call this a relationship.
Heres a question: Why was Octavia even living with her father when her mother would've cautioned her away quite strongly?
oh god, vy's spider is going to kill him.
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About the moment you pulled out your hair when trying to get through to Octavia about her dad.
That's how it used to be. It's sad that this version of gangs and criminal organization doesn't exist anymore.
Ha ha ha, you're boned.
If there's a window in that room, I'm pretty sure it's at this point that it's looking pretty good to jump out of.
Looks like Maurice has a new friend.
Finally caught up. You happy now?
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Very.
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I'll get to correcting these when I have the time, and as for their cutie marks. They share their names with the musical symbols.