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My roommates a bassist eh? Neat
It's spelled 'gala'.
Science doesn't care for personal space... neither does Lyra.
dat end song doe. also still a nice story
Do you...do you not pronounce it like that?
Oh Lyra, never change.
Can't wait till Maurice learns about Octy's family. I forsee much hilarity.
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Can't wait till Maurice learns about Octy's family
You mean her Familia.
Raises eyebrow
...did you mean Berry Punch?
Is it me or did he forget a certain cup that may or may not bite him in the rear later?
I have the weirdest feeling that this tour thing might not be such a good idea. Also there are crumbs all over my screen because Pinkie keeps touching the fourth wall with those grubby mitts of hers.
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Nope, totally unrelated.
Fucking incredible! It was made even more fun just replacing the human's name with my own as I continued to play out stuff, especially since they felt that level of vague but with enough personality to feel similar to pretty much people like me, but especially with the chapter 3 stuff and the job hunting. I was just laughing my butt off at these characterizations for the ponies. xD
I await more amazing chapters!
And thank you for giving these two ponies some much needed sense of INDIVIDUALITY! Even if they still sort of play out similar enough to the usual brand, they actually feel very natural in this setting. Seriously, BRAVO!
A Teen fic that has the freedom to express itself thanks to the M rating which give bashers who see OctaScratch on feature box with a human tag instant downvotes. :P
Chapter 2 wasn't really all that confusing, felt more flashbacky. Pretty much when the V.I.P. shows up it just spins into a "Oh, you~" moment with you-know-who with their swag set to permanent On setting. Sweet job with the presentation and all around. I like the accented GALLA you put there. Felt like it what with Octi talking. If not, well, enough people pointed out the obvious, I suppose.
Heeheehee, oh Lyra... you silly mare you ;D
Nice job on this again! hehehe
Good choice for the song. I love it.
Hubiera quedado mejor si hubieras puesto las frases en Español.
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FUUUUUUUU-REAKING auto correct!
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That's just Maurice's brain translating it for the non-spanish speaking readers
Good story keeps being good. I can see the main character not taking his groups to some places for being total dushbags to him, and other places like Bon Bons to help her drumb up some buisness.
5901208 Pero entonces habrÃa tenido que traducirlo todo, su un dolor .
But then I would have had to translate it all, its such a pain.
And with that simple response, my sides have reached a new plane of existence.
Nice. I do hope that Lyra snaps out of her crazy after she gets over the initial excitement of seeing a human. No doubt still determined to spend time with him, but have enough time to realize how crazy she's been acting. XD
Still though, great to see more of this from ya. Well done.:D
"...my legs exhausted after the mile I probably walked today."
Seriously? A mile in a day leaves the legs exhausted. I'm an overweight 30 year old with tendinitis in the right akelies and shredded ligaments in the left ankle and I can do a mile, cross country even, easy. In under 30 minutes. Maurice is really out of shape.
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or maybe just lazy...
i couldn't help but notice the scene with bon-bon was like another story i'm reading witch is awesome. im loveing this so far
stayclassy
Godbless hand-crazed Lyra, you're doing gods work.
Also, YourEnigma is the shit!
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Eres un Latinoamericano o un Español?
O simplemente lo usaste como trama ?
Great chapter, and i love the song choice for the end. YourEnigma is one of my favorite pony artist.
Man, Vinyl's just a rude jerk in this fic, isn't she?
5902882 It's more along the lines of, she speaks her mind and doesn't give a damn what anyone thinks about what she says
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I'm gonna tell you this and say that I am Hispanic...Latino--same thing to me. Funny thing is, I speak spanish just fine, but have difficulty reading it.
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Mexican ??
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Olé~
I just wanna say that he is very lucky that it was Twily that copped a feel and Rarity. With her silk hooved touch he would have blown all over her face in like five seconds flat.
Another wonderful chapter.
hehehe, My Roommate's A Bassist, awesome
Wow tour guide that's certainly a new job in the HiE genre that I've read. Good one
Huh... Tourguide... Usually it's something more like candy maker or musician. At least the ones I read
And I am outta here. Sorry I draw the line at Twilight fondling his junk. This was not a clopfic as far as I knew. So I critisize such a perverted scene. Even my athletic doctor knew not to due that cause when he tried the first time he learned to keep his hand away from a martial artist's groin.
...I was then escorted from the building for throwing the doc threw the window. Granted it was only the first floor but I don't make the rules.
Now if this was a clopfic, I critisize too much story not enough smut.
Walking the line is annoying for both types of fics.
Keep up the great work. C ya later!
what?! Thahahaha i barely even started reading this chapter and im already spitting my lunch in all directions in a fit of painful laughter. Ohahahahaahahahaaha
*sprays all my lunch in the air* Yup, goodbye lunch. You will be missed .
i cringed and slapped my self a couple of times to be rid of the awful shame i felt for maurice
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I aim to please, and tell you what; if you can find me, I'll reimburse you for your lunch and shame.
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You are possibly the first one here in the comment section to notice that!
Also, it was more along the lines of Maurice was ranting and Twilight just kind of rolled with it.
5914894 welp the whole chapter was super charged with humor. Cant w8 for what you have in store for the next chap.
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Senpai noticed that you edited your comment a couple times there...
Also, about the Twilight thing, it was more of a mock threat, but you're welcome to your own interpretation.
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Welcome to the wonderful world of writing.
This... was very enjoyable and I have no real problems with anything in the chapter. Good for you, author.
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I'm...honestly surprised you liked it; I assumed you hated it from day one.
5915350 Rest assured I don't hate it. I took/take issue with a few things done and used in the story and writing, but as a whole I rather enjoy this. Now hold on, I think I have a sweet roll here somewhere.
img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121009224850/elderscrolls/images/5/5c/SweetRoll.png
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Oh boy! And it's not my tenth birthday party!
5915457 You get one for each chapter in which I find has nothing objectionable in it.
Very nice cover art, Enig.
Like the cover art broski
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That cover art is stupid. Who ever made it must be a loser!