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5817623 That person, I've found, is rather incorrigible when it comes to what they like in a fic.
Getting good! Can't wait for more!
Like the story, but why is this mature? So far this is teen at best.
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We just got this ride started. Give it time.
5836495 Let the story develop more...
Funny thing is that I just had a Japanese banana suit bar dream once, except it was oranges and it was last night.
i really like this
stayclassy
5836495 Sex tag, mainly. Plus whatever weird stuff they get involved in...
Chris is best character in this story. Hooves down.
Nah. Nice chapter lol. And I loved the dream he had.
Ooooo, awesomeness...
Ahem, uh, what I meant to say was, this is pretty good, I like the awkwardness between Maurice and Octy, it was very fitting and well portrayed. and amusing
Keep it up!
Luna dammit...
AS FOR THE REST OF THE CHAPTER IT WASN'T ENOUGH
MOAR
MOAR OR LITTLE TIMMY WILL SUFFER
I really like the way you've set these characters up, especially Vinyl and Octavia. Octavia feels like a mother to Vinyl Scratch's more laid back, I-don't-give-a-damn attitude, which I know is pretty standard for a story starring them but yours made it feel more... real, somehow. Toss in an alien, and what do you get?
Shenanigans!
Love this fic and especially love it after hearing "another irish drinking song", i absolutely love that song. Nice choice in music for octavia as well. Keep up the great work.
Never have I identified with a character so much, and the music bits were a nice touch.
I would like to humbly request more.
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I like! Please, continue!
This is lovely. Can't wait for more XD
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Ya caught me
5837504 Nazeem is pleased.
Adorable chapter.^^
I love the interactions between Octavia, Vinyl, and Maurice. Well written and well done!
Looking forward to the next update.
The dream sequence was funny and I really liked the banter in this chapter, but I'm a bit disappointed that otherwise nothing much of note happened. The main character also seems to be adjusting a bit fast, but I suppose the time skip of a month would explain that. I'd be interested to know how long you plan for the story to be, because that seems like a lot of character development to fast-forward over if you don't plan to do it in flashbacks at a later point.
Nice choosen song, but Bach isn't really my suite (and I am German). If I think of Octavia, I always think of this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQ9RPTEkQW4
Talk about string instruments:
THAT is my favorite:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uYhuJVLUxEs
Very nice I really like both the story since it's so gives back Ocativa and Vynil's relation and the music spices it all up. So I can't wait to read more.
Wait Chris in the dream was the one who just got laid by Scoot inspirated to this HIE fanfiction?
like the pacing of it so far.
I disagree. I find rainbows even more beautiful knowing the physics behind it.
I've never laughed my ass off while reading a fanfic! It's genious!
I know I would enjoy it there...
Also i'm really liking the story thus far, Oh poor Luna; maybe more good dreams are to come later...
well, that was a great send off piece.
getting a second chapter out of you was like pulling teeth.
Ugh, I hate that word; wub.
Wow, you really confused me with that dream scene. I actually jumped back a chapter to see if I missed something.
Nice.
If Luna doesn't spend more time in the hoo-man's dreams, I will be sorely disappointed. If she's as old as everypony says she is than she's seen it all, done it all in dreams... pony dreams that is. Human dreams are the unexplored land! So much to see, so much to do, so many shenanigans to be had.
But I know it's just a silly distraction from the main story. Next up, wubz! If an opera singer can shatter a glass, can Vinal blow out the house windows?
p.s. What the heck can he do? I mean, sure, handy-man is a very exclusive career seeing as how you have to be human to do it. What skills does this guy have? And how soon will it be before some mare tries seducing him? (And are any of you readers old enough to remember the show Threes Company?)
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It is still pretty much a low-tech setting, random mixtables out of nowhere left aside. If he made it into tertiary education, he ought to have the skillset to do pretty much anything in the general service industry or clerk sort of stuff up to at least double entry accounting. Anyone who managed to make it through whatever his school's English faculty used as their obligatory historical plays and Calculus is at least competent enough with writing to taking down dictation and with enough math grounding to do any kind of basic secretarial work without needing any extra training. I managed to fuck around traveling and doing nothing much of value with just that for almost two years when I was a teen, at least.
Plus he can do it without glowing in the dark or having his mouth full, that ought to be good for something. Wait, that doesn't sound quite right.
500th Like!
more luna dreams please
i know a lot of us can relate to this dilemma.
Great second chapter sir
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HANDS... Human magic baby. *Bow-chika bow-wow*
Wait, this isn't rated Mature? Ok, just scritches and belly wubs- er, rubs.
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I'm sure Vinyl would like a belly wub
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Octavia would too, but she's got an image of being a proper young mare to maintain. It simply would not do to roll back and expose one's belly and give that human the big watery eyes and pouty bottom lip.
Not Vinal though, I can see her just sprawling right across his lap like a cat, not saying it, but silently demanding he stop whatever insignificant human thing he's doing and attend to her tummy's needs. I mean, really! They put a roof over his head, put food in the pantry, and give him a warm bed to sleep in (ok, his government bits do that but it's all semantics)... is making a poor helpless unicorn happy for five minutes too much to ask?
5844795 The story is rated mature...
It ought to be millennium, by the way, not millennia. The second is also correctly spelled, but it's the plural of the word.
Your pacing is rather awkward. You jump forwards from where we left off, then go back, the go forwards again. It's rather jarring.
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Chose voilet because that's how they were at the end of the royal wedding ep, and also, red on white makes me think that she's either a vampire or an albino.
And regarding Spike, NOH! He hasn't suffered enough...
Vinyl, I've got one word that would make your statement invalid (if they existed in Equestria)- Chakats.
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There's also cerise/rose/magenta (whatever eye colour RD has). I usually like that one , it's kinda a middle ground of the other two.
Lol, yeah. Especially when you consider the fact that Nowacking (Vinyl's unofficial/ fan-appointed VA) also plays Police Girl (who's a vampire) in the 'Hellsing Abridged Series'.
Vamp Vinyl: "B****es love moi Bass Cannon!"
Whhhhhhy?
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I'm well aware of her role in Hellsing Abridge, as well as that she voices Crazy Misty in the Pokemon Abridge
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Awesome. She also has her own abridged series of 'Swamp Water'. Lol.
I want to make a head-canon that Vinyl's eyes going red is the equivalent to Pinkie's mane deflating.
"Crazy B**** PON3 Is BACK!"
"The uh...the big instrument that looks like a giant violin" and "the violin on steroids" parts gave me the sudden urge to smack someone hard over the head with my bow.
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In Maurice's defense: he isn't a musician
The only thing that came to mind, was how i always ended that annoying Nazeem. one of the few skyrim npcs i hate XD
Nice reference ;3