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It actually updated...now don't screw with us again. It's not fair or amusing.
Also, who killed Murder McKillingspree's neighbor? That stallion owed me quite a few credits!
Huh...interesting. Still a lot of unanswered questions but all in all a really good chapter. Keep it up.
aww dude not cool, thats still cheating that's gonna hurt you in the long run.
other then that i love this chapter.
stayclassy
6047195 I don't know who but I will get on the case
And good story by the way really cool so far I think you got good things going on
Really Maurice... thats still cheating and he totally knows it. If he was wanting to go have sex with other ponies the least he could do was say no to dating octavia. Clearly the lack of physical intimacy is a big deal, if hes gona cheat the moment someone offers.
On a simmilar note, what the heck vinyl? Your friend starts dating someone so you invite him to bed?
While she may not see it as cheating surely she'd recognize that octavia would? What kind of friends do this?
6047574 cuase reasons
And the fact vinyl kinda forced him into that
Ohhhhhhhhh....Yep
It is too late at night to give my full praise of this
Need to know if Murder McKillingspree's neighbor is actually dead. That would be great.
still cheating..and if this is being done just for drama and not have a meaningful part of the story then ima have to go
On the subject of the mafia, I wonder how Equestria's law enforcement would react to these guys.
Also;
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there you go, another great chapter.
Oh, he's cheating. How lovely.
You know what they say, it ain't cheating if you don't get caught! But knowing stories like so, it's gonna come back to bite em on the ass.
She says before coming into heat.
Well I'm sure that this'll end well and not bite him in the ass down the line
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Let see how long until the real drama hit the fan...
While I'm glad this updated I'm on the fence about his actions Vinyl. Had it been say two, three months later I'd understand his desire for release. Just seems abit odd.
That being said though, you've written this well so far and I don't think I have the next chapter as well figured out as this scene may lead me to believe. As with many things; Time to wait and see.
...... I mean... What ever happened to 'Let's ask her in the morning, and if she's cool with it, we'll fuck forever?'
And thanks for making me hate Vinyl now... and Maurice.
Meh I'd take Vinyl up on her offer. She's a smoking hot mare and I gots me a hankering for some of dat pony wub wub rump. And on Octavia's side of things... She wants to date him, but pretty much outright says I don't find this dude attractive or I am not into humans? What kind of relationship is that? From the get go it's unhealthy. It's that or she's afraid or nervous about something.
Jokes aside I don't see why this dude caved so easily to Vinyl. Sure she's a good looking mare, but what of Octavia?
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One, I think Octavia just isn't ready to be intimate yet with him. They've only been on one date after all. Most couples wait before jumping into bed; or, at least, the smart ones do. As for why Maurice is so willing to sleep with Vinyl, he has been living in their world for a while. It's quiet easy to see why he'd be willing to sleep with a pony at this point. And he gets along with Vinyl; sex with someone you have a connection with is worlds better than with a stranger.
Love triangle...
Nicely done.
Honest to God didn't expect that, but at the end of the day it was all pretty adorable so eh. This is basically the puppybowl of romance stories.
Now all we need is Murder Mckillington to make his surprise entrance and warn us of the dangers of sexing strangers!
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You mean Murder McKillingspree; Murder McKillington is his brother-from-another-mother twice removed.
Poor Murder McKillingspree's neighbor. Someone get an investigator. (Personally I think it was the the wife.)
Come on now, seriously, is that really the best way you could think of to set that encounter up? That's pretty low-effort even by porn dialogue standards for creativity. People don't behave like that, not even if they're slutty raver DJ chicks or whatever.
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It was 3 in the morning... DONT JUDGE ME!
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Ah, but you forget one thing; Vinyl isn't people, she's Vinyl.
Two very important things.
First: I wubed the chapter and want moe, or else!
Second: I was first chewing when I read about Murder McKillingspree, I chuckled. Then I read Octavia's reaction when I was swallowing.
I will get revenge for this my friend, I so will x3 (But I loled very hard too ^^ so I may be nice and forgive chu :3)
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Wait...did I nearly cause you to choke, granting me a long-range fatality?
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Heck yea o3o/ It is not a force choke but damn XD Stop playing Mortal Kombat >:3! You are too good!
Hey I was out of town, I ain't done nothing to the neighbor. Just... ah don't.... just don't go down by the river. There are monsters down there.
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Not sure if that account already existed, or if you changed your name...
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6052700 Could be either and or.
Hahaha. I loved the ending joke. I am an Adult. Someones been watching dbz abridged
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Did Octavia explicitly say that she didn't want him because he's human? Couldn't there be something else there? It's not like we know her back story here. It could be a traumatic experience keeping her from being physical with anything.
Yikes, this is one scary dude to feel so entitled to sex he considers it a need rather than a want.
Maurice: "Wouldn't this be considered cheating?"
Vinyl: "No."
Maurice: "Okay!"
Way to think with your lower horn, Maurice. This couldn't have any lasting consequences or anything. Nope. Not like Vinyl's any better.
But hey, maybe Vinyl's secretly an exhibitionist and Octavia is a voyeur, and they have a deal worked out where they do this with all her boyfriends. Cameras galore rigged throughout Vinyl's room, and Octavia in her viewing room, getting satisfaction in the only manner she feels safe getting it. That would make everything ok, right? Well, it wouldn't make Octavia's fear of physical intimacy and netorare obsession alright... Pick your battles I suppose.
This strangely specific example is entirely fictional. Totally. Yup.
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....Gotdammit....your strangely specific example is spot on!
NOW I'M GONNA HAVE TO REWRITE EVERYTHING IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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"Bustin' plots since '84"
Surely you're not serious.
And I'll call you Shirley if I damn well please.
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Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn.
6057908 Damnit, there really isn't a good Leslie Nielson quote to respond to that... Umm...
Sex, Otaku?
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Et tu, Buster?
6057985 Not right now, Otaku.
Wow. This is the second story, my notifications, decided that I didn't need to notice updates for... I feel betrayed.
Keep bringing the greatness.
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There's a reason for that: the day before I published this chapter, I accidentally clicked the 'publish' button when I meant to click 'edit' before it was ready, so I immediately unpublished it after doing that, giving everyone a false alarm and somehow getting this story on the feature box again.
6058438 I feel less betrayed by notifications now.
Seems like the edit and publish buttons, should be further away from each other. A few other people did the same thing.
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6053864 I wouldn't say he thinks he's entitled. More that sex is a real part of a relationship and if the lack of it has been the cause for MANY divorces.
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Exactly!
You know you want this house to be in your story.