Prince Charmless

Roughly a week after Tirek is vanquished, five ponies responsible for it get an urgent message from the sixth. They have a new menace to contend with.

Meanwhile, Trixie is summoned to the Crystal Empire. Hilarity ensues.

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Based on Comic from way back when!

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ShadowLDrago

ShadowLDrago #1 · Mar 13th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: New Management ·

"I, uh, probably should have given you this one first?"

Hehe, nice callback to Canterlot Wedding. I've noticed, the gripe most people have with it, is part 1 as all the goos stuff, Chrysalis, the changelings, This Day Aria, are in Part 2.

He stood by Rarity, who was bound in ropes from her neck nearly to her flanks, mouth covered with a band of tough, though thankfully quite clean fabric of some sort, sitting on her haunches as the prince gave a wicked smile to her friends. Worse than his faintly malevolent expression, however, was the sight of the Alicorn Amulet around his neck. "Welcome, I trust you didn't have too much trouble getting here?"

Oh boy.

"...Can match the power of the Alicorn Amulet?"

Apparently yes, besides, Twilight has been an alicorn for a while now, and she'spretty strong, so, all 6 of them? Maybe.

Applejack hadn't lifted her glare from the evil noblepony. "Kin'na follows, don't it? Don'tcha think they would'a stopped him by now otherwise?"

Makes sense.

Blueblood gave a sinister chuckle. "Right you are, Miss Apple, capturing the other three alicorns was magnitudes easier than freeing Tirek."

Blueblood, you do realize of course that this is the same magic eating centaur that got one over on DISCORD who is already a master manipulator and much stronger than you?

The prince blinked. "A... Ball?"

Yeah. He's a DOG, I should know, throw my dog a ball and he goes crazy.

"YOU BUCKIN' MORON!!" Those standing near Applejack jumped, startled by the outburst. "Don'tcha think if it were that easy, they wouldn'a locked 'im in Tartarus ta' start?!"

She's got a point.

He only smiled wider. "I'd hold off on the damnations, you haven't even heard about Cadenza, Discord, and the Changeling Queen yet."

I'm surprised you got one over on the last two as both are highly competant manipulators, Chrysalis can hypnotize and Discord can turn you into a toy.

"At Tirek's face!" Pinkie cheered.

Yep, and it was glorious.

Blueblood grinned. "I've felt just dreadful about what happened between us, the night of The Gala, and felt I should make it up to her." He turned to the pony that once spattered him with cake, gently drawing a hoof under her chin. "I hope you can forgive me, Miss Rarity, as none in Equestria are finer than you to be my queen."

Come again?

Her pupils shrunk as he drew close, his eyes admiring before a variety of increasingly unpleasant images of what may await her flashed through her mind. He stopped a few centimeters away from her face, pulling back and drawing a hoof to his chin in contemplation. "Well, 'princess,' I should say. Decided against the title of 'king', you know?"

The one smart thing you've done, as I doubt being called King would go over well, what with Sombra.

Twilight spoke quietly, glaring at the prince. "You'll never get away with this, we will stop you from absorbing the magic of Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Discord, and even Chrysalis!"

You realize he's likely to already have done that, and was all but waiting for you to say that?

He was met with a collective, confused head-tilt before grinning malevolently. "I did it thirty-five minutes ago."

See?

He blinked, eyes glowing red when they opened, his body immediately enveloped in blinding red light. When it cleared, he was adorned in a golden mantle and horseshoes, a magnificent red cape covering most of his body below the neck, the Alicorn Amulet proudly displayed on the shimmering gold on his chest. His horn lit with red energy, the scelera of his eyes turning yellow as the irises grew red, his pupils sharp and cat-like. More noteworthy was the presence of white wings emerging from under his cape as he reared back, laughing maniacally, and conjured a strange crown, looking like a menagerie of horns and hats from those in his absorbtion list, Discord's mismatched antlers sticking out the most.

I admit, that looks awesome.

howard035

howard035 #2 · Mar 17th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: New Management ·

This is extremely campy, and I love it. I hope we see the evil Prince doing the classic "date with a girl who's tied up" routine with Rarity.

Drakua

Drakua #3 · Mar 17th, 2015 · · 1 · Chapter 1: New Management ·

Well, you screwed up trying to describe the helmets as umbrellas with domes on top. Made me have to look at the comic again to figure it out. Maybe instead you should describe them as dome-shaped umbrellas? Despite the fact that they look more like This than umbrellas. Interesting adaptation of the comic though.

P.S. Where was the "You killed Kenny" to go with the "You Bast*rd"? ~~which was sort of out of place in this story which had no swearing aside from that~~

Mix-up

Mix-up #4 · Sep 15th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: New Management ·

It's too bad you don't have stop this story, but if you don't feel like continuing this you might as well stop it.

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