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5719181 Nopony is stopping you~
Can i submit a human?
I don't normally like anthro stories, but this was pretty good. I felt that the sex scene itself was a little rushed though.
5720322 Sorry. It was my first time writing clop.
5719375 For a sequel, maybe.
5720402 No need to apologise! I still liked it enough to give it a thumbs up!
Also, this.
5720403 Thank you
5720403 I'm PM you the character
I guess I could read
5720675 yay!
5719375 It's been done. And done. And done, and done, and done, and done, and done.
cool story, about time Blueblood got punched!
I am Like number 14.
5764881 Thank you.
首先，我喜歡在那裡這個故事是怎麼回事。但是，你真的需要工作在描述人物的外觀和功能的更多。
在段落，描述有點種馬或馬的自我一人被詳細說明。但它發生是非常模糊的，我並不想冒犯或任何東西。拜託，我覺得這是你第一次寫馬蹄聲。
我鼓勵你繼續前進在你的寫作，我想因為它是你的激情。和好運氣讓你的夢想起飛。
First of all, I like where this story is going. But, you really need to work on describing a character's appearance and features more.
In one of the paragraphs, describing somewhat a stallion or mare's self was detailed. But it happened to be very vague, I'm not trying to be offensive or anything. Please, I think this is your first time writing clop.
And I encourage you to move forward in your writing, I guess since it's your passion. And good luck letting your dreams take flight.
.........(good luck with your writing)