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Sunset Shimmer - Embodiment of Light - Woomod



Sunset Shimmer has tasted the rainbow, and returns home.

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Chapter 6.5 - The Moon and the Tower

The Imp glided downwards landing in front of the school, it was night, the school appeared empty and was locked, the imp looked around and nodded. A circle inside a circle with seven symbols appeared in front of it and it stepped through.


Vice principal Luna’s office was characteristically dark though it being night that rather went without saying. Months ago she would have dropped her cup of coffee when the impish girl walked through what appeared to be some kind of magic portal but magic had become a part of her life.

“Here we go again.” she groaned.

“Greetings” The imp smiled warmly taking up the seat infront of her desk.

“Um, Greetings.” Luna blinked, ok yay not more magical problems.

“Oh coffee, could I have some?” The Imp asked.

“Errrr how...old are you?” She asked then watched the wings on the things hat flap “Nevermind, coffee.”

Luna poured a large cup for the imp.

“Milk and sugar if you wouldn’t mind?” It asked politely.

Luna put milk and sugar in front of the imp who stirred in far too much and then spoke.

“If you keep letting your envy grow it will get the best of you.” The imp stated.

Luna blinked, was this thing offering her advice?

“I know you feel underappreciated for putting in just as much as your sister, but I’m sure she views you as her partner not simply vice principal.” The imp continued taking a sip of coffee.

“Yep...definitely giving me advice.” Luna just looked at the thing.

“So, I must apologize, as this isn’t a social call to help you, I am here on selfish pretenses.” The imp stated.

“What do you want?” Luna asked.

“Someone interfaced with the source on this world, who was it?” The Imp inquired.

“The Source?” Luna blinked.

“Big rainbow light show was probably involved.” The Imp responded.

“I’m not in the business of revealing our students secrets to unknown magical creatures.” Luna stated firmly.

“Would you be in business if I was a known magical creature?” The Imp asked hopefully.

“No.” Luna held firm.

“I see, there are many desires that can lead me to what I desire, Avarice, Wrath, Envy. Telling me would make things simpler, but I respect your choice.” The gateway began to appear in front of the Imp again.

“And do get that envy under control, or It will consume you, and my next visit will not be a social call.” The Imp stepped through the gateway.

Luna picked up the phone and dialed.

“Celestia...Yeah I know how late it is..Something is coming for the girls...No I’m ok...It can open portals and It, It knows things Celestia…It knows your desires, your sins...No, I’m ok.”

Comments ( 7 )

That ending there was hilarious though I wish we knew what humo Tia was saying to humo Luna

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That or the spell is listed as having no chance of failure if successfully cast. You're interpreting things to fit the way you want it to be rather than looking at it objectively and considering all options. In that case, I'm not going to convince you because you want Twilight to be dangerously insane and a monster from an ethical viewpoint. The characterization of Twilight in this story seems based on that viewpoint of yours, so I think I'll stop here and wish you the best of luck on your story.

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In that case, I'm not going to convince you because you want Twilight to be dangerously insane and a monster from an ethical viewpoint.

I think twilight is flawed and makes mistakes, I hardly think she's a monster. That's certainly not the impression I wish to give.

The characterization of Twilight in this story seems based on that viewpoint of yours, so I think I'll stop here and wish you the best of luck on your story.

If that's your problem, I'd hope you'd at least read the Twilight chapter, I did not assign the Judgement Arcana to it without reason.

5669662 You CAN STILL DO THIS!

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I've got no editor for one, and different editors feel very very different so even if i found one i'd like to Clean up my ideas. Going back and reading i get people's complaint about it feeling short, frex.

6433131 Sorry, I can't do more. BUT TRY!

DON'T DEPEND ON OTHER PEOPLE!

JUST TRY!

I want to see what happens nexxxttt!! PLEASE!!! XD

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