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Sunset Shimmer had changed much ever since Twilight had left. And she then received a letter from Equestria that Twilight was coming back to see her.
Sunset Shimmer had a very good plan.

"Escaping through the portal was a great idea!" Snips exclaimed as soon as they got out the mirror in the Crystal Empire, it was the dead of night there, so no-pony could hear them.
" You two stand back" Sunset Shimmer said, turning round to make sure that Snips and Snails were far back. She pulled out the sledgehammer, and smashed the portal... Forever.


Twilight finds out that Sunset Shimmer had left, with no way of turning back.

Will Twilight find her in time?

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 4 )

Dude, too many 0-0-0-0-'s.
And the timeskips seem a bit confusing, but if you could make them make a bit more sense, like giving them an important role later or something. Great plot though, all the Sunset Shimmer stories I've seen are about her NOT being a total evil person. Kudos

4312714 Welp, time to contemplate for an hour about how I'm going to make a sunset shimmer story in which she is a totally evil person, but never actually get to writing it.

Are you planning to continue this story?:duck::applejackunsure::unsuresweetie::rainbowhuh:

4312714 Dude, he's obviously tabbing out some good ol Djent. 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Drop Q if life m8

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