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Sunset Shimmer had changed much ever since Twilight had left. And she then received a letter from Equestria that Twilight was coming back to see her.
Sunset Shimmer had a very good plan.
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"Escaping through the portal was a great idea!" Snips exclaimed as soon as they got out the mirror in the Crystal Empire, it was the dead of night there, so no-pony could hear them.
" You two stand back" Sunset Shimmer said, turning round to make sure that Snips and Snails were far back. She pulled out the sledgehammer, and smashed the portal... Forever.

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Twilight finds out that Sunset Shimmer had left, with no way of turning back.

Will Twilight find her in time?

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Comments ( 4 )

Dude, too many 0-0-0-0-'s.
And the timeskips seem a bit confusing, but if you could make them make a bit more sense, like giving them an important role later or something. Great plot though, all the Sunset Shimmer stories I've seen are about her NOT being a total evil person. Kudos

4312714 Welp, time to contemplate for an hour about how I'm going to make a sunset shimmer story in which she is a totally evil person, but never actually get to writing it.

Are you planning to continue this story?:duck::applejackunsure::unsuresweetie::rainbowhuh:

4312714 Dude, he's obviously tabbing out some good ol Djent. 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Drop Q if life m8

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