In spite of Twilight Sparkle recently receiving wings with her "Ascension" she remains apprehensive at best about her new appendages and refuses to fly. Luckily one Rainbow-maned Pegasus has a lot (and i mean A LOT) of experience flying. She knows she can get Twilight to fly if she just show her how amazing it can be...and spending time with her favorite egghead wouldn't hurt either.
I'll be highly surprised if no one's done this before but here's my take on it.
PS:Thanks to Twidashforever for helping me out on the story
Pretty nice, but a couple of errors with spelling:
It's Pegasi (Plural) and Pegasus (Singular), not Pegusi. Other than that and a couple of grammatical errors, this is pretty alright!
Don't you mean maned and Pegasus?
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Yet, here she was. Glancing at her mirror she hardly recognized her own reflection!
Those were just a few of the errors I found. Perhaps have an editor go over it to spot all the errors? It would help your story immensely
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Ahh thanks. I tried to use the app Grammarly to make up for some of my more....egregious errors, butits eems some still slip through the rug.
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Don't rely on an app for that. Get an editor
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Valid point. But my schedule is rather tight lately and doesn't always link up with editors.
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Oh ok. I guess that's understandable
There were some spelling and syntax issues, but it didn't get in the way of a very nice story.well done