This story is now a Collab between me and TheMyth.
Sometimes when home doesn't feel comfortable its time to move on and find comfort from the rest of the world. More tags will be added when I find them necessary.
The pic is not mine
I do not own Mlp or Hasbro they are owned by Lauren Faust or Hasbro.
With the new character limit I decided spike will be the only character tag I will feature But their are other characters. Background characters means anyone besides spike.
Sorry forgot to say I have a hard time conveying my thoughts so Chapters will take some time.
Changed the stories name do to changein story direction.
Chapters (3)
You've peeked my interest. Tracking.
<GLaDOS voice>Don't dissapoint me.
583751 Ill try not to as long as you don't experiment on my me
Why would you not love Spike, Rarity. He would fight for you he did with diamond dogs. He lost but he would do it he gives you everthing. His only about 4 years yonger you can wait. Why Rarity why do you hurt him? Im so sorry Spike I'm so sorry we can both be forever alone.
583788 I kept a knife near my throat as I was that I don't like to see spike sad but it gets better.
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Dont Cry Spike I dont want to see you cry. Oh celestia please stop him I'm going to cry.
583796 Oh thank Celestia I hate to see the little guy cry. He does so much and gets so little love.
583817 Without ties to rarity hes a free dragon and its on to greener pastures.
583831 Well I'm a big Spike and Rarity fan for my own reasons but hey his a free dragon a broken one but free so its cool. Unless its applebloom I try but i cant see that work
583897 Theres no romance tag for a reason loss stings but there's always happiness to be found in other aspects in life.
583936 Cool looking forward to the fun.
There needs to be more Spike stories (one of the reason's he's the main character in most of stories). One thing though, I would avoid using numbers in your text such as, "8 hours". Looking forward to some Spike adventures!
583936 so basically when romance fails aim for sex
Couldn't help myself.
584095 Oh you
Wanderlust - Baroness
584488 Fuck Yeah I have the blue and red album. Wanderlust is one of my favorites songs as well as A horse named Golgotha and war wisdom and rhyme.
Baroness and Mastodon Plus The sword.
584518
The Sword and Baroness, yes. Mastodon, no. Never could get into them, I always thought Mastodon was overblown really.
584523 To each his own
anyway I hope you enjoy the story.
Yaaaaaay another Spike fic! These are my favorite, you don't see too many of these. Can't wait until the next one!
where's mah continue?
615206 Soon my friend soon.
Im sure hope so
617541 Sorry forgot to say I have a hard time conveying my thoughts so Chapter might have a bit f time in between.
Just in time "slowpokeface.jpg"
617591 *sticks tongue out and leaves for an island with no internet* No I couldn't do that to my self the internet is my sanity.
Also no mustard it scares my friends they are sandwiches.
i think you already lost your sanity
look at light some time (Amnesia:Dark something)LOL
617617 THE LIGHT IT BURNS close that window already trying to write here.
617629
nevermind, i want moar chapters, dialog over, lol
617663 Damn right on it.
Decent, but doesn't progress the story at all really, and the whole dialogue with Virgil has some major grammatical problems.
Remade the chapter what do you think is good bad meh do you want to kill me because this silence BURNS.
Thank Cry-sis! It is updated!
By the gods you need to put punctuation in those walls of text and work on breaking up your sentences because you a LOT of run-ons.
Poor spike, I feel so bad for the little guy.
This story is starting to get very good
I like it so far.
I like to try my best to comment on every chapter I read of a fanfic. This first chapter gripped my heart, because I am such a huge Spike fan, and for him to witness the mare of his dreams kiss a stallion, and don't even give him a second thought breaks my heart as well. Oh, gosh I feel for Spike so much so far in this story.
I really do have to agree with Spike during his thoughts. I mean if you have a friend that has been your friend since you were young, you got to think about if he would like to go with you to such places, instead of just requiring him to clean up or he is too young. My heart hurts for Spike even more in this chapter. I know Twilight is doing her best to take care of him, and get him better, but what she needs to do is really ask him how he feels. Have a serious talk with him about what he is going through, not only with Rarity, but the fact he is all alone most of the time. Another good chapter.
Please, please, you and TheMyth does have to continue this. The one thing that has to happened for Spike to feel that he is truly loved by his friends and family, and feel like he belongs in Ponyville with them, is for not only Twilight but everypony of the Mane Six to go in search of him. They need to be there for him more than ever. I just hope it isn't too late. Please continue with this fanfic. I feel for Spike so badly.