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OroKinAu


Who am I? A 43 year old history teach living a double life as a brony fanfic writer.

Comments ( 22 )

Awesome! A sequel! Can't wait for more!

Very well written & enjoyable.

This is turning out great, keep up the great work!!!

this is actually very cute, i love me some story with mah clop.

What to join me in the shower so I can well

I think you meant to say "want to join me"

Wow, this story is really something. I like how Celestia is like, "That's my little Blue."

And Twilight is all, "What the f***!"

Oh, you must update this more often!:twilightsmile:

Twilight is a little jealous, hm?

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...Oh dear. I just imagined her trying to insert herself into Blueblood's and Trixie's relationship.

Ah well, it could be the one and only opportunity for Trixie to hear Twilight Sparkle of all ponies beg, for a change...

6911423 Is it bad that I feel good when Twilight got mad about what Blueblood said? Normally I don't like him but this is one fic where his personality matches Trixie so well it seems funny. And Twilight... well she's there... and mad.

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Question: Should Blueblood do it with Twilight is she begged? I'm currently stuck with two great options either way, so some input will be appreciate to help me make my choice. :twilightsmile: Thanks.

6911972 I would say no, but at the same time if it's comedy based it would be interesting. So I wold most likely say no unless it leads to a conflict.

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Haha, well, I'd say yes. This is the perfect setup for Blueblood and Trixie to finally come out on top (no pun intended) over Twilight, why not take it? Also, Blueblood might be aware of how submissive Twilight tends to act around Princess Celestia. I could see a guy like him poking fun over this, perhaps even insinuate that Twilight has a submissive side in general. And he might even be right.

Don't do it Blue your better than that!

He shouldn't do it unless he's got Trixie's go.

If he gets that, then rail away, prince. Though I fully expect Trixie to ask him to make it clear to Princess Twilight that Trixie and Blueblood are above her, in the bedroom at the very least.

And here I was thinking Trixie was really Twilight in disguise. Goo d job Blue!

Good story, this really got my ire up at the out of charecter portrayal of Twilight. But despite that and my absolute loathing of the cheesy sappy romance... it was unique and I can't really say there's anything wrong with it. Truly fine work, no two less deserving ponies finding happiness, and deal with it I shall.

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Thank you, glad you liked it. I always wanted to write a cheesy sappy romance, but with a twist: the main characters are egotistical and prideful jerks. :rainbowlaugh: So it is okay to loathe them, they were never meant to be well liked anyways.

But once again, thank you very much. I appreciate it.

Those two jerks are perfect for each other.

OMG that ending!:heart:

Suck it mane six! The two most obnoxious ponies in the world just got married!:flutterrage:

And that gift! What a dick move Blue!

Thank you for calling Twilight a dumb bitch who just blindly obeys Celestia like a dog. That is exactly what she is.

Fan. Fucking. Tastic!

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