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OroKinAu


Who am I? A 43 year old history teach living a double life as a brony fanfic writer.

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What would you do if you wake up one morning to find yourself living a completely different and alternate life?

What would you do if you suddenly find yourself married with foals?

What if you are now married to the pony you least except?

Applejack is about to get the shock of her life as she tries to navigate a world where she is now a mother and wife to a stallion she never had feelings for.

An unexpected TrenderJack tale.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 106 )

Not a big fan of this ship or any ship for that matter but i dont hate shipping.

That being said i'll bite... Heavily. This seems interesting.

Cool! I want to read more of this.

It is a bit fast though.

This is interesting. I can't wait for the next one. Good luck.

Hmm... I'm more of a CaramelXApplejack fan, but nobody really knows about him. :/ anywhoozers, nice start! 'Simple Ways' was one of my favorite episodes in season 4. I'd like to read on and see what you do with this story. If you ever need any help, just PM me! :D

You have peeked my interest, let's see where this ship (hehe) sails shall we?

Also I complament your southern accent, however keep in mind, the accent even if it's a first person story should never get any heavier than a skipping of G in ing, or ya/y'all/ain't. You start going to far and the accent gets too thick.

I don't mean to be bothersome, I just get picky when people bring in AJ, especially when they try doing accents and they do then wrong. You however are stuck on the highest green point of my accent-o-meter. Keep it up.

This looks like it could be interesting.

You have come to my interest bud! Also the shipping! Hope you make more than waiting like HL3.

Applejack... You can't exactly plan out what your kinks are... you just have to figure it out... though how you react to them is impressive...

That was great. I only hope Rarity and AppleJack can solve this.

I'm interested, but this goes way too fast.

Not exactly a ship I personally support in full (Hell, I probably don't support much in the way of shipping Tenderhoof with anyone at this time, given I haven't seen the episode in full yet to give me a full picture of the guy), but I'll admit, the premise is interesting enough, and the bit of comedy certainly nice. I'll keep my eye on it for now, and I look forward to what happens next.

Growling turn ons.... All of my yes!!!!!!

That sweet. I wonder though what Discord wants her to learn. Thanks for the quick updates. They are great to read.

Wow that was quick. You're good.

Really interesting. Can't wait for the update.

Is it just me, or is this tale suspiciously similar to the movie "The Family Man", the one w/Nicholas Cage and Don Cheadle??

Because I am seeing tons of the same thing in the premise of this...:rainbowderp:

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The Family Man is also suspiciously similar to "It's A Wonderful Life"
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But yes, there is going to be a lot of similarities.
Mustache for you :moustache:

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Cool. Good to know that I wasn't going crazy..:pinkiesmile:

And, I know that it is like "It's a Wonderful Life", but considering that I was born in the 80s, a lot of movies that I know well are relatively new, that is where I saw The Family Man. Celestia help the person that has never seen the original B/W version with James Stewart (if I'm mistaken, I apologize :twilightblush:)

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It's probably cliche, but I'm betting that the lesson may be either missing opportunites or learning how life is so much more than just making a living.

Strangely, I am intrigued as to why DiScOrD of all ponies wanted to teach this lesson to Applejack, as well as why specifically Applejack--it could have been any other pony. Personally, I could see this more likely to happen to Rarity of all ponies----though in the same vein she's in the same state as Applejack.

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Don't worry, you'll know the reason why he is doing this at the very end of the story.

I keep reading this over, and over. And Never stop lovin it....:heart::pinkiehappy::yay::twilightsheepish::raritystarry::rainbowkiss::ajsmug::trollestia: dont stop.... NEVEr:flutterrage:

I'm thinking of shipping this. :derpytongue2:

This is a very intriguing story so far. I can't wait to see where this goes!:twilightsmile:

That was great. I loved the family moments in this chapter. I can't wait for the next one. This is one of my favorite stories.

Cuteness...... Error... Error..... Its to much :heart::heart: Im dying of cuteness.... Plis keep going.....

Cuuute :pinkiesmile: I love interactions between AJ and Discord!

Is smack Discord repeatedly an option?

Roasted draconiques anyone?

Darn, the rolling pin missed. :ajbemused:

Soooo.... Rarity went crazy? Awesome.

Crazy Rarity is best Rarity. But there has to be more to it than Trenderhoof ending up with Applejack, right?

Also, I'm kind of hoping that Big Mac and Twilight ended up together. :twilightsmile::heart::eeyup:

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Of course there is more to it.

But the Applejack x Trenderhoof thing was the hay that broke the camel's back so to speak. She was teetering on the edge before then.

That's funny learning about Mac. I guess AJ needs to learn what happened to the other 3 before we can help Rarity. Great chapter.

4740455 That's good to hear, I hope we'll learn more about Rarity soon. Sure, this is Applejack's story but Rarity's condition is so intriguing :raritywink:

Huh, what a pair. But you know what? I can dig it.

Aww, I was hoping for Twilight. Oh well, FlutterMac is good too :yay:

And a nightmare.. I wonder if it's just something that Applejack's mind made up or if it's this world's Applejack's memories that are affecting her.
Come to think of it, what's going on in Applejack's world? Did they swap places or what?

Nice job. I think you did a great job with this chapter. I hope Fluttershy can help shed on light on what happened. We still need to meet Rainbow Dash and Princess Twilight Sparkle. Great idea talking about sex in this chapter.

A week without sex and she resorts to bondage…now we know why she has that lasso! :ajsmug: :duck:

I hear FLuttershy thinking of naming her foal Petunia and all I can think of is...
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Also... I half expected AJ, upon hearing the news that Flutters and Big Mac being married, to go...
:ajsmug::Ah knew it!

Wow. I hope AppleJack can save Rarity. To be honest I hope if she gets to her own world, she goes out with Trender. That would be nice. Great chapter.

Looks like AJ is finally learning her lesson.

:trixieshiftleft:You know it kinda hit me that maybe what we are reading isn't Rarity going insane but Applejack instead and she's seeing things true
Rarity's perspective. Wouldn't that be a twist. :trixieshiftright:

I'm not seeing where Discord's trying to go with this. Especially that 'bettering your life' line feels odd to me. So what if Applejack didn't want to go out with Caramel for drinks? It's her choice, if she wants to dedicate her life to her work. Of course, whether or not it's the right choice is a whole different matter. :ajsmug:

My interpretation of the ending to this chapter is either AJ is being shown the sum of all the back-breaking labor she's done over the years, or she's in a coma because of a farm accident and this is all in her mind. Kinda reminds me of that Star Trek episode Tapestry, only with a happy alternate world, not a sad one!

Is it just me or is Discord turning into the narrator from the Twilight Zone?

AJ is so solely focused on her work she pushes away everyone else around her. Maybe she's just afraid of getting in a relationship for some unknown reason.

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