Twilight has a dream involving her adopting Trixie's twin foals. After waking in the middle of the night from said dream, she hears a knock at the door, and opens it to find none other than Trixie.
Note: This story will be updated on a part-by-part basis, and is planned not to have more than 5 parts.
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FURST?
I have way too much time on my hands
EDIT: Having gotten over my midnight stupidity induced first-ing, I am liking where this is going. Fanfiction is always better under the light of Luna's moon!
...Did I really just type that? I think I should sleep, the madness approaches, and it is beginning to consume me...
dude, this sounds great, cant wait to read it!
Why can't Trixie be real and let me marry and have kids with her!?
*cries softly*
oh my fuking GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
MUST KNOW MORE
that is....
if you want to release another chapter
oh my goodness; i look forward to reading more of this.
Must...Have...More!
Update soon please!!!!!
Oh my goodness, you got me interested
d'aaaaawwwwww
515815 IT BEGINS! :D
That was quite good i think i will take another!
Ok, very good story, but there's one probleme I'm having is that is daydreamer a girl filly or a boy filly?
Great but sweetie belle having a construction Job rather then singing baffled me but everything else was okay.
A minor nitpick, but since you established the twins as both being fillies...
Daydream ran into the house, his mind set on the lunch inside.
As the two entered, the sound of Daydream snarfing down his lunch could be heard from the door.
Otherwise, this is looking really promising.
It seems a bit simplistic, Fluttershy seemed a little Out Of Character towards the end judging by the way she talked, and I REALLY hope you have some justification for Trixie going to Twilight, the one who inadvertantly showed her up in Ponyville during Boast Busters.
Criticisms aside, I like the premise and look forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Ummm... Fifteenth?
Okay, I really wanna find out why Trixie can't raise her own children and why she chose Twilight of all ponies to take care of them... and also, who's the father? So many questions, next chapter soon pls.
I thank you all for the positive feedback on this story. Being in the Central Time Zone, I was afraid nobody would see the story on the homepage, but I was wrong...by a long shot...
So, onto the answering/questioning!
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Don't worry, she's a filly...unfortunately, my dyslexia decided to kick in, but no worries, as of this comment, it's fixed. I actually had a similar issue with a previous story between three characters' names, and it was much worse...
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Construction isn't necessarily Architecture. Architecture is the design of buildings/structures, while construction is the actual building of the building/structure. It was the first design-relative field that I came up with...and I feel that Sweetie Belle would make a great engineer...
Oh ho ho this is going to be good.
Um Isn't Sweetie Belle the singer?
Or did you just go random on their talents?
Either way, Great so far!
You gonna need any help with this or you good?
(like helping with the OCs, or story line?))
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I think I'm good on this one...I already have the basic plotline in my head...
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Oki doki loki!!
Alright, I think I have a nice path on this story that won't make me crash this story into a beached whale...
Wait, what?
i wonder what would happen when RD hears about this?
her precious wonderbolts being super jerks
keep em coming!
Well that was... strange. And yet entertaining.
So I guess the question is
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582207 Methinks that it'll be along the lines of
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Oh, this is neat and original, I do say.
Facinating concept, I'm interested.
keep the story comeing
Everyone should know the wonder bolts are asses me thinks its best twilight take the foals
Poor Twi. She has so much responsibility now with them lil ponies.
Update please?
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Sorry for the notsomanyupdates this week guys, I've been swamped with finals, along with taking drivers ed (did pass my instruction permit test, though)...along with the difficulty of writing this, I really haven't found the time these last couple weeks...
Expect something within the next two weeks, but I'll write it when I have a moment of inspiration.
-Dusk775
I was out of it at a point last week, so I ended up doing edits to the Google Docs versions of these stories...unfortunately, there was a bug with the GDoc upload system in Fimfic that didn't allow me to do this until around today when it was fixed.
Very, very minor edits, but grammar is fixed, re-phrasing occured, small things.
With finals, relatives coming around, and learning how to drive (still scares the hell out of me
), I think it will be a bit before part 3 comes around...especially since I've been avoiding it due to characterisations, which I never actually did with any characters except pinkie pie.
-Dusk775
Dusk got an eta for chapter 3 now
Not really...apologies, I just picked up a job, and things sped up a lot...I have the beginning of the chapter "done", but I'm just not sure what direction to bring this story around...it might be a while.