When Princess Luna attends Chocolate Cream's tenth birthday party, she knows this colt is very special.
She'll understand just how special Chocolate is when he shows her how happiness doesn't just come from parties.
"Friendship is an island that you retreat to. And you fall on the floor and laugh at all the ninnies who don't have enough brains to have your good taste." --Ray Bradbury
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I'm sad now.
5343432 Good, good. (Rubs scaly hands together.) Seriously, I'm glad you liked it.
This story is beautiful. So sad, yet so happy. So full of life. Life that is only made brighter by the pain of the past. Words don't express the feelings in this story... Should have sent a poet.
This picture will have to suffices for my thoughts...
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Well goodness. I was not expecting that whole mountain of feels.
That was really sad, really beautiful and was a wonderful story to get all thoughtful about before bed. Thanks!
5347173 You are very welcome. I'm glad I was able to entertain you.
Great story - added to Sad Luna.
Edit: Oh, wait, it's already there!
5355089 Ha ha, beat you to it! (I remember what happened the last time I did a Luna story.) I'm very glad you liked it.
When I finally reached the end of this story, I felt my heart stop.
Will Chocolate ever get better?
5414152 Drink some coffee, that'll get your ticker going again.
As for Chocolate? Well, what happened to him isn't like growing back your hair.
He's doing all right, considering what happened to him. (Trying to avoid spoilers.)
Thanks for putting my story in your "Hearfelt" folder.
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I know, it's just so sad. I've had people lose their lives in car accidents and such. Some lay there and waste away in a bed, others are aware of where they are like Chocolate but are trapped in their bodies. You deserve the bookshelf my friend.
I was redirected here by Rage Reviews.
5480503 Interesting. I don't recall sending this story to that group, but my memory is a rusty bucket. Anyhoo, I hope you liked the story.
Story Approved in Species of Equestria: Alicorns
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5641023 Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked my stuff!
It's cute and sweet.
I wrote a review of this story!
It can be found here.
6280512 Thank you very much!
6300630 That was a great story and I am proud to have it in my group