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Spring Mist, night guard of Everfree, is in love with the night and forever loyal to Princesses Luna and Celestia. Yet in wishing to be more, he will happen upon a series of events that will change not only his own life, but the face of Equestria for the next thousand years. As Luna is seized by the Nightmare and transforms into Nightmare Moon, Spring Mist will be there as a piece of the puzzle. But what happens when the Nightmare begins talking to him?

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"Spring Mist" sounds much more like a mare's name...

I may consider reading this story later. No time now, either way.

There is one major proble with the story. There's not enough chapters. MOAR :flutterrage:

504227 You'll get more, don't worry! Still trying to figure out a release schedule.
Glad you seem to like it!

Anything with Luna is good. The show never seems to broadcast her much up until the wedding

504472 Yeah, I always hated that. I love Luna. For some reason I really just latched on to her and her story...

:trollestia::moustache:

Ohoho, I wonder what will happen next...

561884 Why thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

Hmm, so the plot thickens. I like where this is going. :trollestia:

593200 Really, this story is really good. Don't know why it doesn't have as many views and likes as it should have. :twilightblush:

Wow, two chapters! And this one was very nice, with some backstory. :moustache:

Wow, this story instantly caught me!
Great job so far! Can't wait for new updates :pinkiehappy:

610291 Thanks! Glad I could get you hooked!
every Monday and Thursday!

610838 Oh yeah, finally Monday shows his good side ^_^

Nice. :moustache: You ever consider adding this story to some groups? You can pick up more viewers that way.

626400 That's a good idea, thanks! I'll look into it!

A floating rock with writing on it. Interesting. :moustache:

Looks like we're gearing up for another double feature.

"A small smile formed on Mists face"
Mist's face
"he wrapped a foreleg around Mists neck"
Mist's neck
"ā€œNever, Clove.ā€ Mist said"
should be
"Never, Clove," Mist said.

677064 So right, how embarrassing. Can't believe I missed those. Will have words with my proofreader. Thanks!

Bravo, bravo! Another wonderful chapter, for such a great story.

709174 Oh you! You'll make me blush!
Twi can do it for me here: :twilightblush:

"Itā€™s is a shame to leave.ā€
I think you mean: It is

i am amazed at your callibur for this continue please:pinkiehappy:

741684 Thank you so much! Worry not, it will continue for quite a while!

I always love luna fanfics and this one is so well written... I think you should submit it to eqd and i hope you will finish this story... The last story I enjoyed this much was equestrias twilight which sadly won't update.
Anyway: fanfic is great, why not submit?:pinkiehappy:

768967 Thank so much! It means a lot!
Have no fear, I will finish this story! I'll begin work on part two soon!
To paraphrase Twilight: For you! For me! For Equestria Daily!

There's a lot of good happenings in this chapter. :moustache:

Why not?

If you get in, good.
If not, you get feedback.

"[T]he stars are actually fireflies stuck on, quote ā€˜some big, bluish-black thingā€™." :rainbowlaugh: Ah, the Lion King. I really need to rewatch that if just for the sake of nostalgia. Been way to long.

I have to admit, I'm surprised this isn't more popular. It has great world building, and not to mention that it really does feel like the characters have taken on a life of their own. This story has almost earned a 5/5 from me (I actually make it really hard to get one of those from me, and this nearly makes it). Keep up the good work.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

797121 hehe, yeah. I felt it had to be done.
Thanks so much for the kind words! I'm glad it impressed you!

I have to admit, this is one of the few stories that when I finish reading a chapter, I'm disappointed that I didn't take the time to enjoy/savor it...

Also, why do I feel that :trollestia: was the reason for the bridge of light?

809603 Many thanks.
Yeah, it was one of those time when I wrote it, then facepalmed. It will be mocked for a while. I think every writer is allowed one or two really stupid moments, and that is why we have lampshades. Regardless, sorry for that. :facehoof:

809713 Sure, it earned a slight facepalm, but then just laugh it off. It was somewhat funny.

809745 I'm glad. It did deserve it. I blame it completely on :trollestia:

lol how do i get over there As the thought flashed through his mind, a long stream of dim light poured out of the balcony, connecting directly to his destination.:rainbowlaugh: seems legit dont beat yourself up about it that could be good to have like get two third though the story and wish you knew how to do something that seems imposible good story:pinkiehappy:

Nice. Though I'm actually concerned with how the plot is developing, because it seems to be a bit slow at the moment. There really isn't any clear goal aside from Mist's given task by Celestia to become Luna's friend, and the overbearing concern with the rock.

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