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Will we see him in his wolf form again?
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I would think that since he has magic he might be able to switch between the forms at will.
Swag
Nice chapter. Glad to see Ash is human again.
5407713 The Five Knights in this story are from different games and also Luna is the best pony ever great choice in your username.
5407860 5408728 Well he may or may not hell you may even see his inner monster.
Hope to write to you all again soon!
5410615 thanks
5410615 You my friend have got it pretty much narrowed down how did you do that?
*Gasp* are you secretly Pinkie Pie. (Give's suspicious look)
Translation: give me more i ill eat you with my mouth that is in my mouth
Good fic, but you shouldn't have gone for two names from the same franchise.
It makes the references too blatant.
5435678 The same franchise who?
5436825 Altair and Ezio. They're both from the same franchise.
5436867 How is it blatant?
5436970 Blatant wasn't really the word I was after, but my point is It makes it seem as if you have a slightly more limited scope of diversity.
If it were me writing, I'd probably have Altair for the slightly more exotic sounding name, and probably have Squall instead of Ezio.
Actually, that's not true. I'd use an anime swordsman's name, to throw in even more diversity, like Sanosuke or Zabuza.
I'm not saying you HAVE to, just what I'd do.
5436989 Ok but I wanted someone who would have been worthy of both the titles of both peace and order.
Think about it Altair brought peace to the Brotherhood and Ezio brought order and Arno is also in the Assassins creed franchise brought hope to the people of France during the revolution so they kind of fit the situation.
5437055 I would have another counter-point here, but I'm a bit distracted right now, so you can have the win.
Kingdom Hearts 2.5 HD is EPIC!!!!!!
Kira Jesus Yamoto called, he want's his title back
Ash the badass he's got a badass name and a iron arm and he defeated two super villains by himself ash blade the badass. Woohoo. fuck yea
Bullshit. You can't talk. Just scream loudly, like, 'HYAAAAAAAAH'.
6640629 when I saw that, I yelled the same thing xD
6640629 Are you suuuuurrrrrre?
I only hear link talk in grunts.
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Agree
I'm jumping ship here. This is a clever Idea, but poorly executed. The story is in dire need of either an editor or just a MS Word grammar check.
The character is an unshakeable, John Wayne-esqe personality, in a bad way. He's just jumped universes, changed species and had a pretty pony princess tell him his destiny is to save all of pony-kind from stuff. His reaction: Ok, im awesome lets go.
Also, killing a crossover hero off screen? Shameful.
Total verdict: Thumbs down.
6865995 Link is quite literally a link from the player to the game link is basically the player put into the game world so he technically could talk but due to the reason for links existence he dose not in any direct form
6640629 and HYEEEEAAAAAAHHHHHH
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I don't know if anyone showed you this.
I think you meant honored not horned.
When I saw this small mistake, I was laughing so hard. It just sounded sooo wrong, if you catch my meaning. *wiggles eyebrows *
A time jump? Why? I like details. Also, better than the last chapter. Still rushed, but has less poorly done cliches.
Since they're in a much smaller area than most light visible from space is when looking at earth, it's likely melting their faces off or ad least permanently blinding them.
Well that was quick.
Overall, this was not a bad chapter, just rushed. Most of your chapters should really be 2 chapters with extended, more elaborate content.
Well this story is rated mature...
knight of freedom fuch ya
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Comin' to save the mother fuckin' day yeah!
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When I read this
I immediately thought of this song.
Logic just got f'd in the a.
Otro personaje del tipo heroe
My dude, your Oc is getting kind of ridiculous. Raised by wolfs? Iron arm? Wolf form? The 6 nights? Next thing you know he’s the seven element. You have to tone it down, a lot. Make it more realistic and less super hero of friendship and love that can’t die
Eternal state...I do not think it means what you think it means.
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You forgot the fact that he managed to develop ability to speak while being raised by wolves. Mind you, they are not very talkative folk.
Um, no. Discord made him go away, remember?
I know she apologizes, like, three seconds later, but this still feels INCREDIBLY forced.
I'll continue reading, as I'm otherwise enjoying this story, but just consider this strike 1.
It's okay; Pinkie sensed them.
Got to love when the hero is handed everything instead of earning it or actually trying and failing then later on getting better at it
Also slow down this story is going M 5 in a school zone. Also don't be afraid to change the story abit you added a character not everything should line up with mlp. We already watched that now we a
Want a new story.
His speech was also edgy, yes
We know you want to die wont give up name is ash and brother is razor. Thus this is were I am going to start speed reading to see where this book gets good.
It’d be cool if he could change from human to wolf whenever he wanted