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Not the best way to go about this, but good nonetheless.
5609823 Hey you don't have to read it if you don't want to.
This, was good.
demons? Interesting twist on the changelings.
5609871 ...I said it was good. Why wouldn't I want to read it?
I only said it wasn't the best way because I've read the same general concept a couple of times before.
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I suck with words.
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I'll put it into a term I know I can't fuck up: Just take the bloody compliment
5609907 Got it and my deepest apologies if I seemed offensive.
well that was awesome. Next chapter is going to be interesting
That was intense. Wait... I caught up? FUUUUUUUU now I'm going to have to wait like everyone else ;-; love this story so much and love op ash.
5620636 Hey thanks for your comments I read what you said about the battle scenes being a bit short so I'm going to try and make them longer also I didn't get a comment about the burn mark on Ash if I may ask what do you think it means.
Please tell me we will see more of this story
5622436 You most definitely will.
5620929 the burn mark on ash you say? Hmmmmm, well its most likely (obviously) from his time on earth. Maybe sometime after his family of wolves died he got captured by a slave ring or something along those lines. Maybe he was even forced to fight for his life on multiple occasions which in turn would explain why he's even better at fighting (Even being on your 'own' with a family of wolves won't get you that far). This is just me thinking and pulling ideas from the empty space in my head.
when I saw there wasn't a next chapter I actually yelled no and pissed off my aunt.
You're going into the realms of Gary stu here...
THIS IS AWSUM! I CANT WAIT 4MOAR!
i love this so much
so im guessing that chrysalis is celestia and luna sister and sister to discord??? but what about sombra??? because faust said theres two
am i on the right track???
MOARRRRRRR
5645568 Sombra wasn't an alicorn he was a unicorn remember.
o-o-h-h-h-h oh yea forgot about that well am i on the right track with chrysalis??
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seriously doe am i on theee right track!?!?!?!??!?
5646082 You'll find out my editor is working on my story so please be patient also it's gonna be a doozy.
AWESOME how old are u by the way just curios
P.S if ur a girl im going to kiss u
5646386 As explained I'm a Brony and straight but I am not revealing my age alright personal info.
"sruo eb lliw airtseuqE dna llaf lliw uoY .nruter lliw retsam yM .revo t'nsi sihT."
Hm. So that's how demons talk. I think I can learn demon in a few seconds.
im still alive but kinda got bored of mlp so i guess i took a vacation stories are still good
6505474 hmmm it does
6505474 yes yes it will
One hell of a epic battle and chapter. This was awesome.
>>Going Back and reading this story again made me think of this song.
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Ash op..... also, he has Assassins Creed music but doesn't recognize Altair Ezio, or Arno...
7301920 he also didn't recognize link, and he's kinda BIG
How would he be able to figure that something is off about her when he just met her for the first time?
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Gut feeling
FOR THE NEW LUNAR REPUBLIC
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Did you see the contrast between twi's description and what she acted like?
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That's what I was saying lol
Would have been great if he had the doom slayers armor
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Blasphamy! There is only one man who is permitted to wear the armours of the Doom Slayer.
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This escalated quickly. 10th chapter in the story and main character already alicorn-ish with 4 wings, can stop time and have free pass on any level of bs in the future thanks to local version of Faust. Oh well, guess next enemy he'll have to fight will be at least Cthulhu.
Reads like a very long-winded and quite mediocre first act of very perverted hentai anime.
You know looking back on the show and events with changeling, the writers sure made her a careless character. I mean being a species that all about stealth and infiltration, they sure dont do their homework on people their imitating or invading very well. if chrysalis was have the infiltrator and ruler she was, she would known about twiight and her friends. But it is cartoon show...so let i let it slide lol
Cool chapter and cool twist on the changelings 👍
Though I do have a question, so Ash’s wings can be compared to Maleficent’s?
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In terms of size yes.
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Cool 😎