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The coat kinda looks like the one's Organization XII uses, without the metallic strings.
Organization XIII
This shall be fun
Well, they are screwed. I mean really? Reverse parent trapping an immortal moon goddess and a knight who can fight on a level equal to the lot of them individually? Are they really that foolish?
youknow listening to Attack On Titan soundtrack and the piano kicked in... man i really did cry bravo! bravo good sir!
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good job keep it up see you next chapter
The shipping begins!
Great chapter.
Dun dun dunnnnnn
Divine loves intervention let's see some romance
The *push* meaning organized date?
GREAT FUCKING CHAPTER I FUCKING LOVE THIS BLOODY STORY I <3 U AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it can't wait for the next chapter.
MORE I NEED MORE TO FEED MY HUNGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
in all seriousness great story cant wait for the next chapter
Oh shhh*******t the royal 3/4 + Cadence playing match maker. DISCORD BRING OUT THE POPCORN!!!WE GOT SOME ORGANIZED CHAOS COMING UP!!!!
Felsin: *wearing a army pit helmet* I'm going to take cover * ties a pillow on said helmet then runs into a pillow fort covered up with iron plating. Then peeks out of a hole, eyes only visible.*
Me: On second thought I'll join you *takes a hand full of popcorn l, then sprints in the fort.*
5767575 Who exactly is screwed?
5792760 Celestia and Cadence. Figured that was fairly obvious towards the end of the update.
5793117 My bad.
5769028 Technically Cadence understands what she's doing she is the alicorn of love after all. But when it comes to Ash I see your point .
Can't wait for the next bit!
Lol I know this might be a strange request but I want a list of the music you listen to wolf blood
You got good taste bro/bro-ette
best chapter ever in this story whene is next chapter
5842366 My editor is working on it so don't worry about it but all I can say it will come.
Walking on sunshine?
I had to laugh my ass off into a pillow so it didn't wake my family up. And VERY good joke.
I'm walking on sunshine mother fucker, wake up. Walking on sunshine woohoo walking sunshine
BAD PRINCESS celsetia,cadence,dreamcacher,crystalys BAD
5774447 can I join I got sorry
6323498 *tosses popcorn and army helmet to biowolf* sure, just be prepared.
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This is gonna be bad... If you need me I'll be on the moon. * Grabs Army Helmet and jumps in a fox hole*
6517480 *grabs and pulls out of the fox hole* Oh no! As a multiverse traveler, I can guarantee your safety, by teleporting you to a dimension that allows you to watch what happens in any dimension at any time, without interrupting what happens there. Is that better than hiding?
Well, I honestly have to admit. This story actually got GOOD.
Now don't get me wrong and think I'm trying to degrade you or anything, but when I started reading I had quite a few issues with it. It wasn't bad per se, but there were a lot of little things that just put me off at first. The pacing, lack of punctuation, some grammar mistakes, inconsistency with the characters etc. I debated for a while, but I decided to give it a shot, 'cause hey, if you don't give others a chance, how can you expect them to take a chance with you? Well, that and the fact that you might be skipping on an actually bloody good story. But I am happy to say the further I go the more it improves, and I am really glad to see that. Few writers learn from their mistakes this quickly. I commend you for your tenaciousness (I mean seriously, 400,000 words? Damn. Bravo.), but even more on actually improving your writing.
Like I said, I had my doubts, and perhaps I still have a few. But as of right now? This story got to the point where I can stop asking myself "should I stay or should I go?" and I can happily say this got a like and a favorite from me. And I'm barely of a third of a way in. Holy crap.
So congratulations, man. I know how hard writing can be. Stay awesome,
Bloody Buddy
6323498 Wait for me!
Right when I read this comment
I thought of this video
I'm just reading this story with music and a song called Harmony acendent played around the end of the pla
ycoincidence I think not
7305474 *clap*
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Well played good sir, well played indeed
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLLLLLLZLZLZZZZZZZZZZZ HAVE HIM ADOPT PIP I BEG
have
Also sexy foreshadowing?
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Pfft, amateurs. *Hides in nuclear bunker with satelite t.v. watching whats going on*
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please *looks at the hologram in the bridge on a Venator-class star destroyer two sectors away*... the sad thing is i don't think i'm far enough
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XD
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Turns out I wasn't far enough.
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Turns out I wasn't far enough.
Bad candence no spying
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Can't hide anything about love from her,
Lol someone needs to animate this
One thing i wonder is will ash one day adopt pip?