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...is it bad that this reminds me about Outlast, The Evil Within, and Silent hill?...
Great Chapter!
Errors that I found:
-quesadilla (unless you went for the English pronounced version)
-turned
-As the memories...
7118619 I actually did go for the English version yes and I believe I fixed the one and only misspelled one.
The creatures remind me of the ones from the asylum lvl of thief I HATED that place
Ok so serious time, punctuation is definitely a thing that needs to be worked on a bit. The lack of commas and periods where they should/could be can be kinda cringe worthy sometimes. Otherwise I'm fine with everything when it comes to content.
I love it, a chapter to prove that even a demonic angel has fears
You played that game didn't you
7119716 I play a lot of games so you need to be more specific.
7120314 until dawn it's a terror game
Speeking of games do u play warframe
The one game I was thinking of when reading this chapter was Bloodborne
7120375 I don't have the console but if I did then hell's yeah.
7121214 don't just fuckin don't I'm all for terror games (if it's advertised as a terror I don't get scared by it) but that, that gave me nightmares about it to this day and I played it when it came out. just thinking about it give me the chills. Until Dawn.
If ur talking about warframe then I got it on PC
No need for a consol for either game
7121254 Don't worry I meant warframe I've seen a few things for until dawn and I'm like nope but if you like terror try Outlast. But be warned the trailer will get your heart pumping.
7121341 or any silent hill game
You say, "if you would" in this chapter a lot. That is fine but it just seems odd to me because I don't remember you saying that before.
Dear God if the umbrella shows up in this world I swear they need to summon Leon displaced to this world.