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Finally the story is back i swear the waiting was killing me
Nice...and ash got an upgrade, well the heavens should be contacting him now(yes I still believe this is angels vs demons like story.) I mean seriously ash is a freaking fullout angel, if I was a God and I saw this...I would be like,
Clap...ok lets talk to this guy, he must be doing something right..
Any one agree?
Well Ill be waiting for the next chapter, when can I expect it to come out?
Nice.
6475339 Very soon.
Some spelling mistakes I found:
-Acres
-???
-lives
-ridiculous
-rage
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚
Chapter!! Yassssss
oh come on everyone wanted spit's to herd with ash and you decide not to?
Best.fucking.chapter.EVER!!! Your the best!!
To bad on the no having spitfire in a herd oh well guess I'll have to wait for someone else to do a good spitfire but all in all good chapter
6475339 Every time an angel showed up in the bible, they said "Do not be afraid". The popular image of angels being humans with wings is so people won't run screaming from the amalgamation of animals with wings possessing multiple eyes and a bone crest over their face. They tell people they meet not to be afraid because they are impure, but because Angels are terrifying to look at, never mind talk to or listen to. Ash is just an upgraded human.
Shining: http://s297.photobucket.com/user/melodyleblanc_album/media/Focus.jpg.html
I'm pretty sure Asylum colours are white/grey.
Omg so much stuff happening i hope there is still more
now i rember the i stopped reading this
Fourth wall where are you
Damn
Cought this one error
I wish the nobles had an actual reason for their behaviour. As of now their only purpose is to drive the story forwards.
The irrational hate towards humans besides them being ancient national heroes and the general behaviour towards royalty makes this seem very unlikely and hard to believe. Laws only seem to exist to give those nobles some advantage, they are close to non existent otherwise.
HOLY FUCK GAMER LUNA!
random word double up
"so I gen get"
It took me multiple reads but i finally got this reference, if its implied or by merely accidental but i remember this line is from halo with The Master Chief and Cortana.
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It's that way with politicians, not hard to believe that nobles would act the same way