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I see a prime shipping opportunity
Let the ship set sail
Really like the mares' reaction to Ash's physique and I found the ending cute. Also, respect to Michael Jackson.
5502539 Here's to MJ all hail the King of Pop.
Prepare yourselves. The shipping storm is coming.
I'm so sorry, but I need to get this out of my system.
Vegeta what is the word count on this chapter?
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Great chapter keep it up, can't wait for the next one!
SHIPPIIIIIIIIIIING!!!!!
There are probably literally a thousand Luna (mane 6 random) x Human Clopfics on Fimfic if thats what everything say like that.
personlly MJ thriller would been better song in this chapter
Thank you all so much for the word's of encouragement next chapter is coming soon so hold onto your stomach's because it's going to be a blood bath.
5509692 I know that but Thriller was too predictable and everyone seem to have forgotten ghost's so why not play this one.
5517650 Uh what is that I can't activate it.
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will Ash be able to turn into a wolf and human at will? Because I would like to see that....
I'm going to read this... But I'm having to force myself to do so. Clean up your little intro thing here on the story page itself. All the grammatical errors make this look like its not going to be worth reading, but the chapter length alone shows that you've put some serious time and effort into the story itself. At least, I hope so.
5539313 You know if you don't like it don't say anything just leave a dislike or leave it be if that's how you feel. And yes I put a lot of hard work into this story and if you have the time look at the first comets of this story. Go through them and see how far I've actually come.
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So, you're saying don't leave you feed back. Alright. Sure. Constructive criticism is a part of any creative PROCESS. As in, you are meant to be told what needs improving so that you A) Can fix it, and B) Know to avoid the same mistakes again.
5539405 Ideas of when the chapters will be released?
5540194 How about right NOW!
A wild shipping opportunity appeared!
Go ash blade!
what will you do?
-Seduce
-Flatter
-Be obvious
-Do nothing
I am totally for ash x Luna
5620499 Here comes the Mind Meld!
Nav: WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING!!??
If he works in a forge, then why are his stuff wooden instead of metal?
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he only had a few hrs to do so
i SHIP TOSE TWO
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[/THE SHIPPING HAS BEEN DOUBLED!!!size]
6339488 So he doesn't stab a kid.
6760770 th ship has doubled in size. Feed it redshirts to sate its hunger.
That song part... so cringey
5511694 #AshXLuna!!!!
WARNING: Ship Detected! (Activating defensive protocol:163-ea24d-ta15)
7358970 error error maufukchen maufu uu cuuuu.....n
De viste haber hecho que ash se convirtiera en lobo otra vez/ash turning intho a wolf again
6967374 know what's really cringy? "Cringe"
...
8057475 As much as I want to facepalm at that, you're really not wrong.
i cant help but think of these scars from bleach
https://anirei.deviantart.com/art/Scars-of-Battle-405469091
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The fact that you unironically respond to honest opinions and advice with such contempt is honestly kinda funny.
Like, I've never seen someone say that, people who want to give constructive criticism instead of just thumbs downs, should shut up and leave you alone before. You try to defend yourself with "look how far I've come from the older comments" when you are actively encouraging people not to post any more comments that ask you to improve.
You seem to not realise that the main reason why stories this long and this hard to read have only negative comments on the first chapter is because no one constructively minded actually wants to read any further. You take it as a sign of improvement when it's nothing of the sort.
I will be fair to you and say that there have been minor improvements to the quality of writing thus far. The concept has become fucked beyond repair and it's a complete power fantasy, but it's less physically exhausting to read now. Unless groaning at every pointless crossover or ridiculous cliche tires you out.
I admit to not having read all the way in, but I seriously hope you do not maintain this attitude of trying to silence criticism. It makes you look much worse than just going "fine, you're right, I have decided not to go back and fix things, but I will think about your advice in the future." I mean, that could all be a lie, but saying it is just a tiny bit less insane than trying to force everyone to not explain your problems.
Do you not want to improve?
I'm going to try to be understanding here and assume this is all just because you have a hard time dealing with criticism because it's hard to hear sometimes. That you don't really mean that you want to silence everyone but that you just don't like being told what's wrong.
Hell, it's been a long time. You might not think that way at all anymore. If that's the case, then I apologise. But please. Never tell anyone that they cannot help you to improve. Self awareness is a powerful tool. Use it.
2(3) words mouth and eyes
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2 additional words SOFT UNDERBELLY
I'm calling bullsh*t on that, Spartans NEVER went without body armor, otherwise they would have been easier to kill
The movie 300 took some liberties with it because the director wanted to make them more manoeuvrable
ASH x LUNA...SHIP IT...SHIP IT...LIKE FEDEX !!!!!
Huh, he either gave really REALLY abridged version of WW1 and WW2 history or Rares have really odd priorities.
Guess song was MJ's Thriller. Link doesn't work anymore.
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And something something under the tail...
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I like the Arifureta reference.
Also the song might've been 'Ghost' or "Is it Scary?"
my line of thought is, since I'm the full length video of ghost it features the songs 'Ghost' 'Too Bad' and 'Is it Scary?' And I'm pretty sure there's more but I forget. Anyways, MJ does the whole moonwalking skeleton stunt while singing 'Is it Scary?'. Plus MJ keeps repeating "Are you scared yet" thought the video. While 'Thriller' Is a pretty solid assumption, with all the parallels pointed the other way, I don't think it's thriller.
So the song the author most likely is 'Is it Scary?'
Am I Twilight yet?
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Ye, that was Arifureta reference. XD
And you are likely right, that wasn't a Thriller. At least one of the older comment points to that (as in "Thriller" would be a better song). Most likely song "Ghosts". As I understand, "Is it scary?" was in the movie (also called Ghosts) right before the song Ghosts, skeleton dance was performed during the song and question was asked right at the end of it.
You were so close and yet you aren't Twilight yet.