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More ps I have been reading this for 1-2 or 2-3 days
heh.
Another great chapter. Please keep up the good work
Another awesome chapter!
Some small things I picked up:
-Beginning quotations
Not many errors I can see anymore. HOORAY!!
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚ ヾ(゚∀゚ゞ)
You need to make a chapter where EVERYONE. (Excluding Ash's friends) Want him to cheat on Luna.
7160948 ...
I was wondering about a new heat chapter, think you can do another one, except with the regular ponies in it.
7166181 I'll try.
7166254
I actually hope celestia poses as luna and gets ash to rut her during heat season.
7166261 Hm not a bad thought.
Good chapter and I have to say... SHOOBEDOO!!!
7166261 You do realize what will happen it Luna finds out right?
Taste The Blood
7166757
Uh lets see luna launches celestia goo the moon and ash gets castrated. But ash would still have another foal, and celestia eould rock a pregnant belly.
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I can't imagine why Ash would be castrated if Celestia was posing as Luna though. Unless he could sense the illusion or whatever (because let's be honest, he probably could) he would have no idea and just think it was his wife.
7166836
No think about it like this, ash is somehow affected by the change of turning himself into a merman, and the pheramones from the seaponies is having adverse reaction, and it lowers ash's inhibitions. So when hes approached by celestia disguised as luna he cant tell the difference.
7166874
Again, if she's disguised as Luna, his wife, and he can't tell the difference for whatever reason, why exactly would he be punished for (technically) still being faithful?
7166884
Because luna would be so devistated and blindded by her anger, that she would rip ash's junk off without realising the outcome before its too late.
I think ive read too many hie fics where the human gets hurt in someway.
7166911
Eh, I don't know. To me, this Luna seems more level headed than that. Again, my opinion though.
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And i respect your opinion, but think back, the sea pony queen and her subjects wanted to rut ash, and luna was willing to challenge a seapony alicorn queen in her own kingdom, how do you think she'd handle celestia tricking them behind their backs. Plus luna has had episodes where her anger has almost made her nightmaremoon again.
7167002
Yes she would feel anger toward Celestia, but what about Ash? Would she really not take the five or so seconds to think about the situation? Wait a minute, this is getting rediculous, I shouldn't have started this in the first place.
7167009
Ok ill concede, she would be level headed enough, besides faust wouldnt allow that to happen to ash.
Plus it may have gone a lil far, but it made wednesday night fun. Till next time we battle.
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I await the next bout as well, friend
7167029 7167023 How about you leave what might/might not happen to me after all I know my character better then anyone.
7167132
Will do!
Sir Ash Blade
7166261 You know he'll figure it out before she can go through with it somehow lol
7167132 True Sir. ( Also this is part of the elite group of stories I recommend to newcomers, that list is not very big )
Until the next heat season
There is no "trying" Ash... you already are
Me: "oh god, *sounds of cringe lasting 23 seconds(I kid you not)*
Pinkie talked with Bubbles (mostly about parties) and then I realized there were two of them now.
This is getting out of hand. Now there are two of them.
Yes you can, Ash, given that they ALL just essentially tried to rape you.
Yeah, I'm going to be that guy but a Currant is a dried fruit. I think you meant Current.