I liked the chapter. I hope to next one comes soon.

What's the Grand Galloping Gala you ask how can anypony not know what the grand galloping gala is.

Love this story. Cant wait till the next chapter

Me when i herd is story he was a street rat how cruel and i love this story

Lovely. Just lovely

5384688 I don't know if you read the entire story but he is not from Equestria so he wouldn't know about it.

5384792 that song almost drove me to tears but sadly yes it is true about his past and there is more sad stuff along the way.

i will make it better by wooping you

5384872 Wow, I didn't expect that.

i know im evil (evil baby laugh is a go)

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I know that, I was trying to emulate the reactions pf the Mane 6, or one of the ways they could react.
Didn't he wake up in the Royal garden? So at the Gala, after the obligatory panic from a WOLF being at the Gala, he should go visit Dusk's first home where he hatched.

5384893 I see sorry you just made it sound like he was supposed to know that's all, I just misunderstood it. Anyway I'd better get back to writing the next chapter for you guys.

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Quite alright. I was very ambiguous.

reminds i found that the 5 knights where all game references

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Stayed for the entire thing
Losing little bits of faith I'm humanity every day

5384952 well in the tags I did say that this story was going to have crossovers I just didn't say which.

5385054 perhaps

well you have link...... wait link cant talk and you made him a...FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

5386760 hey just because we can't hear him doesn't mean he can't talk ok.

OMG my mind is gone

5387325 LOL!

okay this matter is serious are we friends

Sometimes i think he is vers sociable, but at the same time he don´t want to do to much with the others, it seems a bit weird for me.
Even if i still had liked it, if he would still fool them with his silent a bit, i don´t mind as much as i thought i would.
The only thing i don´t really understand is, what have they done, that the main six suddenly have earned his trust? I mean he wanted only to reveal himself if he had a reason, i think because of that it seems a bit weird.

Maybe i missed something but somehow it is something that disturbs me.

5388482 Don't worry I'll explain how he started to trust them in the story ok just let me write a few chapter's ok.

5387660 sure I guess?

Love the story so far, I noticed a few spelling errors but nothing too bad, I know there was one place you said two ( 2 ) instead of to. I think it was when you explaned how the library looks on the inside.

Still you have earned my fav and like

yessss i have a friend and for some reason this song popup when i read your story

some times i imagine your story like this me and my mest up mind

5395207 that has to be the funniest and most awesome thing I've ever seen.

stay 20% cooler ender the pony.

so whats this a cross over with

5407713 Well it seems like alot of things so far. However untill this Point we really only have seen anthro and a wolf form, so the author could add more crossover later. But from what I have seen so far the five Knights are taken from various games and it would seem Ash have some atributes from each. In "legend of zelda twilight prinsess" Link could transform into a wolf form but he could not controll it at first, Corvo comes from the dishonored game and in that game there are a Group of people who can use "special" magic that no one else can use. Also Altair, Ezio and Arno is from the Assassin's creed franchise (I think). That is a game where you sneak around and parkour a lot (the same can be said about Dishonored) like how Ash managed to hide behind the pillar and almost managed to sneak out if not for his sneezing. Also the way he fights kinda reminds me of the Assassin's creed franchise however untill something else is added there are not very much crossover in this story so far.
Hope that helps have a good day sir/ madam

Hmmm, this is getting hard to read. Ash's personality doesn't seem consistent yet. At first he was wary of ponies, bust suddenly three weeks later he's all buddy buddy. I guess spending all that time reading the books in the library of the two sisters might have l warmed him up to the idea of trusting ponies, but there was no indication of that. Also he feels entirely too upbeat for a urchin suddenly deciding to trust new people. There is no indication that he observed these people beforehand that would endear trustworthiness in him. I'll continue reading, the introduction chapters can be the one of the most akward parts, I just hope the story picks up.

"What's the Grand Galloping Gala?" I said flatly.

.................... What............... Have............... You........

DONE!!!!

I'm guessing that you got the name corvo the honor from Dishonored?

"The first knight was Link, the knight of courage," she said pointing to the centre window.

"The second knight was Altair, the knight of peace," pointing to the window on the left next to the centre window.

"The third knight was Ezio, the knight of order," pointing to the window on the far left.

"The fourth knight was Arno, the knight of hope," pointing to the window to the right of the centre window.

"The fifth knight was Corvo, the knight of honour," she finished pointing to the window on the far right.

OH MAH GURD! Assassins Creed, Dishonored, Legend Of Zelda... and I don't know who the fourth knight is... BUT IT'S STILL BUCKING AMAZING!
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.....Corvo as the Knight of Honour ? Not in my Play through he wasn't.

6159364 my thoughts exactly I murdered everyone and summoned rats to devour there corpses so no one would get suspicious

>>Chaotic Quill
arno is assasssins creed by the way

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I would imagine ezio as the knight of justice
ibn la ahad as knowledge

but ey close enough right?

Who are the last two knights

6295281 Corvo Is from Dishonored and Arno is from Assassin's Creed Unity.

Reading this for the third time and I still, honestly can say I love this story and I wish it would never end... wow I am never THAT sappy

"As for the wolf situation. When the knights first entered our world they were also turned into animals until they proved themselves worthy to change back into their original forms."

Now i can only see Link as a chicken, Corvo as a rat, and one of thee assassins creed guys as an eagle.

I see wat you did with the five heros

I took the scroll gently in my jaws and placed it on the ground and unrolled it and out fell a golden ticket.

Celestial is a fucking troll. We all know what happened last time someone got one of those.

Do you actually watch MLP? Where in the fuck are you getting these character traits from?

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Lol

"WereyousurprisedwellwereyawhereyaI'mPinkiePieandIknowabsoulutlyeveryponyintownwemeteachotheratthecastlewhereyoufoughtNightmareMoonandsavedTwilightandwhenIsawyouintownwithApplejackIthoughtyoudon'tknowanyponyhereandifyoudon'tknowanyponyyoudon'thaveanyfreindsandthatmademesadsoIrushedofftogetyourpartyreadyandIfoundoutyousavedthecutiemarkcrusadersfromamanticoreso..."
Does Pinkey have LUNGS!!! If so a I think you are overstemating their capasity!

Yep, there's the DARK AND TROUBLED PAST and such.

"Don't you mean everypony?" Twilight asked.
"No, I meant everybody," I replied.
"Well, here we say everypony," Twilight said.

I hate HATE HATE it every time a HiE story does this, everypony is completely incorrect and racist not just against the human but to Spike, Gilda, the Saddle Arabians, Cranky and many many more so to see a story where a human hears that and just says "Ok then" and not say anything about how having a species name in a pronoun is completely idiotic pisses me off to no end!