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Can't wait for the big fight. Looking forward to seeing what happens.
Pretty anticlimactic Lol
and he's dead...the end
This cliffhanger...asshole
hello darkness my old friend... please dont hurt me...
Great chapter!!!!
Little tidbits I spotted:
-Beginning quotations
-"where" in between 'know' and 'it'
-Can't say if it should be "your" or just cut out the word... ¯\(©¿©) /¯
-I believe it should be "sort," which means kind of thing something is; "sought, means to seek.
-Shouldn't that be "path" ¯\(©¿©) /¯
-I don't think you need that word, you could delete it
-Beginning quotations
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I just imagined a scene where his' and rage's souls appear in the middle of court and reform their bodies.
Then get the shit beaten out of them. By Eris and Luna...
Very good chapter bro keep up the good fight!
Worth the wait.
Also, the wait was shorter than expected, sooooooo... bonus points? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
NOOOOOOOOOOO finally after reading this on and off for the last month I am about to read the last chapter...... But....I will always be able to start it over, that is the nice part about having read something this long, when you get to the end you barely remember the beginning. The next time I see this comment is when I reread this chapter
THE END IS NIGH!!!!
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Long live ash!!!