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Wow...
(If you have yet to read this wonderful piece of fanfiction, please do not read my comment) (this is not a hate comment it is just me expresing what annoys me in this story) (I still love this fanfiction) I love this fanfic and dislike it for the same reason. That reason being the title and begining of this fafiction and story. The begining of this fanfiction is just what the title implies (a wolf in equestria), but later in the story it is more of a title of "wolf" that Ash has instead of actually being said "wolf" which really bugs me because this story's title is "A Wolf Among Ponies." Please note this is just something that bugs me this part of this story that annoys me does not mean I will not love the story any less nor will I stop reading this beautiful piece of literature.
6667068 he can still turn into a wolf.
Hmm interesting chapter. I wonder what happens. UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER OF A WOLF AMONG POINES!!!!!
This chapter was intense.
6667521 How often do we see the wolf I would really enjoy it if we got to see more wolf. If the story shows more wolf, well lets just say I lose more of the life I had already lost.
Damn
6670243 Well damn....
6670506 you see the Twilight princess HD Remaster with Wolf Link + Midna Amiibo figurine?
Life and death respect ash? Well shit!
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Wait... WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN
6672163 It was mentioned in one of the previous chapters.
6671367 tree of life protecting baby ash, and death asking for forgiveness from the baby ash.
Ya know kinda one of the many wtf moments recently in the story...
Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one
What?!? I am confused now. MORE!!!!!!
Impressive!
The Story is getting good but you never mention dust anymore what happened to him.
6686372 Don't worry I'll make sure Dust has a proper role in a chapter soon.
I cannot believe I never saw this until 40 chapters later. Dust and Ash Blade. You got that from the saying 'Ashes to ashes, dust to dust' didn't you.
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Remember the old saying. He's a wolf in sheep's clothing? He doesn't belong. At all. And now the story is going,
" Oh hey there, You though Ash could have peace? WELL TO BAD. LIFE AND DEATH LOVE HIM AND HES MET FAUST AND EVIL MCAWESOME MWUHAHAHAHA!"
But yea. Wolf in sheep's clothing.
I'm just going to guess that Ash Blade is a Nephilim
I know, it's lazy and probably wrong. Just couldn't come up with anything other than that, considering Ash's wings. The story had a lot of connections to Darksiders II near the beginning, so that's why I'm guessing this. We're probably going to learn about it next chapter so we'll all probably find out just how wrong I was.
Also, Wolf Blood, could you please not comment to this until after the next chapter is posted? Don't want any spoilers.
I love this story a lot, but you may need to find someone to go through and fix any spelling and grammar issues.
Wow this is getting interesting. Like really interesting
This story is so bad it brought tears to my eyes. After a few promising chapters at the beginning it took a rather quick dive and after reaching the bottom, it started digging. Every chapter bringing a new low.
You are pulling concepts and principles out of ... I dont even know where. They are introduced without introduction and it does not make sense.
I will not, for once, comment on mary sue, but I will comment on antho. It took maybe 10 chapter for me to notice that this story is anthro. For once I decided to not care about the anthro aspect, but the fact that it took me that long suggests that your writing is sloppy.
I can't waaaaiiiit for the next chapter~!!!!!!
6736995 You're correct.
6737414 I remember this story since it only had 5 or so chapters
Por lo que mas quieras edita los primeros capitulos,son tan malos que me dio cancer por cada palabra
6755715 Sorry?
6755820 Well what he said was "
For God's sake publishes the first chapters , are so bad they gave me every word cancer" Or somethng like that... my spanish is a little rusty
6755820 no he said "why do you only want to edit the first chapters, they were so bad I got cancer for every word." Either he's saying the Grammer was terrible or the writing was.
For the Spartan scene. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2XksbG6gwIk Disclaimer: I did not make the video.
Actual line is, "COME AND TAKE THEM!"
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You are right but it doesn't really take away from the story.