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its not as good as when it started sorry but its just not
Once again another awesome chapter wolf.
Regarding the whole anime characters shouting their attacks, I always felt that it was incredibly dumb, as the enemy should technically just be able to avoid it the second they start charging or preparing the attack. Heck or even just be able to kill them while they prep it up. The way I see it, when certain attacks are involved, I always felt it would be better if it was just an internal thought of the character. Like for example the dragon's roar attacks of Fairy Tail. They are holding their breath then breathing out the attack. It's clearly not an outward vocalization of the attack.
I don't thnk you should add the name of the attacks, because from my perspective you are writing a fairly serious story. A story mechanism like that, if not handled correctly gives off the sense that the story is in a way naive or childish.
But that's just my ppersonal opinion
6764576 what if the name doubles as an incantation?
Milord the ender dragon had me write to you that he is not happy,that he caught up.
6764848 then depending on how the incantations come about the situation changes greatly. I'll continue in a p.m.
For the screaming the name of the attack, I'd say just do it like this put it in these brackets.
( insert moves name here ).
Shouting your next move is a dumb strategy and should not be used EVER.
Oy, not the schtick.
I also don't think you need to put the name of the attacks.
P.S: Merry Christmas
Shure but not all the time because it could get boring.
6765766 We agree with thou.
To all residents of all planes in the multiverse. We wish thou a merry Christmas
He did a Rafiki! (lion king)
i caught a v for vendeta reference in here i think
When a hero of a tale calls out his/her attack usually it is to let the opponents know what they're getting hit with and to embarrass the heck out of said opponent or to let the readers know how an opponent was defeated I have read and watch a lot of anime and it's always awesome to see and hear that so I'm all for you putting the names of attacks into the story
I cant really say the attack calling reallly fits this story all that well. Also one mi or correction. You gave fancy a molecule when you ment a monocle.
No, do not anounc your attack. I've always thought that just silly and it give someone the chance to counter or step out of the way.
6764474 Nice Fairy Tail reference. And a very good point.
"Oh yes the past can hurt you can ask anyone in this room and we all feel plenty of pain from the past but during the last three days I learned something you can either run from it or learn from it," I said as I made another swipe at Chrysalis only for her to dodge it. "Ha you see ha, ha now tell me exactly what are you going to do now?"
"First I'm going to do this," Chrysalis said before she hit me on the top of my skull causing me to wince and rub my own skull in pain. "Then this," Chrysalis said before she gave me a hug which I returned. "Ash thank you."
The lion king anyone
7170032 lion king much
Not just his current one either.
Ash is a blood bender
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Duh. Where have you been
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Damn you Rafiki
If only there was an artist in here that could make the picture of the family all together.