What's a letter doing on your bed? I'm sure that's your question. Well, read it and find out.
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Ok i am scared to turn around now jeez this was dark!
Nice little short story and i am glad its still light or else i would be holding teddy bear (welp)
5/5 flutter cry for scariness!
Here I am on a random sweep through the 'new' box, and look who I find.
^.^
*proceeds to ruthlessly judge the story*
Hm... not bad.
Almost upvoted, but decided not to because of the piles of unnecessary exposition in Rainbow's letter.
Also, when Rainbow comes in, she's going to find the room empty and the back window open.
5197307 thanks for the honest critique. Yeah, the exposition was so I could pass the "1000 word" rule. Like I said, it was typed in about 3 hours, which is a really, really short time to develop any story, one shot or otherwise.
Hot damn, 54 views already! Jeebus.
Heh, you should try the Everfree Northwest writing contest. ^.^
You get 2 hours to plan, write, and edit a 2000 word (max) story.
Dozens of people do it, and some even go over the word count.
It's fun!
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Add a cover image of creepy Rainbow with a knife, and you'd get at least twice as many.
5197448 Lolno. I'd fail hard.
5197457 I'm already having PhilliChez make me a cover something along the lines of this:
Scootaloo is sitting by her bedroom door, one hoof holding a crumpled-up letter, the other reaching for the doorknob. Obviously, she's crying.
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Too late now. It's already out of the new box.
5197499 Eh. It wasn't for attention anyway. It was in the spirit of Halloween.
Suddenly, I just got another letter-story prompt. I think I will participate in the Everfree Northwest. Hopefully, I won't get too competitive and keep it friendly.
I knew that this would turn bad. I knew, and yet I read. I enjoyed. And I wasn't affected in an emotional sense. I'm sure that says something about me, and I doubt that it's anything good.
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You read my story. That's all that matters.Dude, I had a horse named Doc. He was my family's first horse. And one day when I was heading for Pittsburgh, we got a call that he died. And I didn't cry.You think I'm worried about you?
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I never said that anybody had to be worried. I only said that I might not have a soul. Or not much of one, at any rate.
Which is somewhat disconcerting on my part, as I'm not even 20 yet.
5363282 I think someone should be worried if you don't have a soul, but I ain't that dude.
I'm not 20 yet either, brush. I'm not even 18...aaaand I just indirectly gave away my age.
Shit.
Well dang, that was some heavy stuff. You can write small one shots better than we can. Don't have much to complain about, we thought the exposition was alright since this was a letter. Didn't see any major spelling errors or anything that set us off.
We could see Rainbow Dash as the type that does that too her friends.
Again good job, you have our upvote.
No offense but now we are going to read something that is slightly more upbeat.
5363931 Yay! Compliments!
5363481
I am not revealing my own age beyond the 'below 20' factoid. For all you know, that could mean I'm a more-mature-than-usual 13-year old (although I am actually older than that).
5366714 Uh...ok?
I'm a little bewildered here. Why is this getting defensive?
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Defensive? I'm just trying to maintain some tiny sense of anonymity. Although I do understand how you can think that, as I certainly gave an impression of being defensive.
5366870 Yay understanding!
Glad you weren't being defensive; I was worried I'd offended you.
5367006
I assure you, it takes a good deal more than simply commenting on age to offend me. Even if it is my age.
5367052 I have a strange feeling that if I keep talking, I'm going to take this somewhere really weird.
So Imma just stop.
5367149
Good idea. I'll do the same.
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Goodbye! (Do not reply to this)
Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore—
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
"'Tis some visiter," I muttered, "tapping at my chamber door—
Only this and nothing more."
Like black coffee... Dark, but good.
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And thus, this story was read by Sycamore.
Surprisingly canon too, what with yesterday's episode. Now we know how far Dash will go when she really loses it.
5908428 Haha I didn't even realize that wow!
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Let's just be glad nothing happened to Tank.
5908440 NUUUUUUU Tank sucks I hope he dies of natural causes.
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I'd be careful what you say about Tank. He can take your off head with that propellor of his.
On top of that, he's a tank! Perfect offense, perfect defense..
5908496 Tank sucks. Nuff said,
awwwww, this is so sad...
I need more. Somehow.