Lapis Lazuli didn't know what made her land in the middle of the Everfree, but she immediately began to regret coming out here, because timberwolves were right on her tail. She knew she was going to die. She just knew it. All she wanted now was to postpone her death for a few more seconds and just run. She didn't expect anyone would fight away the Timberwolves and save her.
She also didn't expect him to save her.
Art by MegaTJ.
The only thing I don't like about this is that Sombra said the reason he turned into a tyrant was because he was on drugs.
I mean really?!
Other than that, this was interesting to read.
6487080 It's my headcanon. Sombra was so madly addicted to crystals that it was all he cared about.
This is a good read, have a like
Its a great story....but the portion about drugs could have been handled better, not saying its a wrong idea, but it came off a little excusey as presented, but have an up-vote for a generally good story
This needs a sequel with a romance tag attached to it.
6598394 Good news, I'm actually planning that. It's called Held By A Savior.
6598406 When can we expect said sequel.
6601128 That's a very good question. It could come out before the end of the day, or it could come out mid-2016. I hope it's closer to the latter, because I like receiving
oversaturating praisereviews and criticism.Quite good. Only caught one typo: "tomberwolves".
6812225 >LATE REPLY IS LATE
Can you elaborate on what makes it good? I want to know what I should stop doing in my writing and what I should keep doing.
6601128 Sequel's out.
I know what Lapis Lazuli is!
Well this is a pretty interesting story and a cute one too so apparently a crystal Pony name Lapis Lazuli got lost in the everfree Forest and worst the Timberwolf were about to kill her but unexpectedly Sombra just saved her from the wolves which she was pretty surprised and even offer her a survival she almost got lost but luckily he got to her before things got worse and somehow she trusted him I got to say this was a pretty nice one although the drug thing was kind of weird choice of why he became a tyrant but not bad keep up the good work