Dimensional portals are opening up all over Equestria, and it's the Main Six's job to round up all the creatures coming out of them and get them back home. Only thing is, some of them have no plan of going back...
Kirby and his friends definitely weren't expecting this. Can they find their way home before the portals close, without leaving anybody behind? It'll be tough, but they can do it, with the help of the Main Six, right? They have to, otherwise they may never be able to get back...
A complete re-write of MS,KaF:TAtSE because I don't want to write that one anymore. This one has completely different plot, however, and that other one has nothing to do with this one.
Chapters (5)
5377425 Thank you for your support! To be honest, I had started writing just for the fun of it. This is supposed to be a sort of fast-paced comedy, with a couple of slow-paced scenes and action to break it up. Hopefully.
And... That's a good idea. I actually now have something in mind for that in the next chapter that the ponies are in!
And as I said before, fast-paced comedy. Trust me, there will be a lot more references throughout the story.
Once again, thank you. Pepdog1, out.
Kirby!
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Heheh, well, she is on the front cover for a reason!
I like doing that; leaving people guessing. I'm going to assume you skipped his description. (I would too, honestly.)
And yes, this story is both post season four and post Triple Deluxe. Meaning season five doesn't count and neither does Rainbow Curse. But there may be spoilers to Triple Deluxe if you don't like that kind of thing.
KIRBY CAN TALK?!
Kirby, but no Zero-two? Lame.
I know he's perhaps one of the most dangerous beings alive, seriously look up a death battle of him...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mwzH7eSOwAc
though I don't think he ever talked
This one's for the books.
5539517 well he's supposed to be a baby from what I under stand so not really. later on yeah but not the way he currently is and we expect.
Say "Poyo" if you like Poyo
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Poyo~!
Kirby doesn't even appear in this chapter lmao.Escargon? Wow you though of every character when writing this!
5650082 Well who gives a *poyo* if Kirby isn't here
KERBY IS AWESOME AS *poyo*
Alright! Finished reading what you have and it's pretty interesting so far! I can't wait to see what else you have in store... ^.^
Of course, she was a little disappointed about her plan being changed, but her fiends did have a point. She put Kirby down on the ground gently.
i just want to point out that you spelt friend wrong by accident
AWesome story so far, can't wait for next chapter.
5825231 Oh, thank you! I often miss things. ^-^;
Oh, and I read all of your comments! I'm glad you like my work! X3
Zero.
Nightmare.
Marx.
Nova.
Galactia knight.
Necro.
The squeak squad.
Nova.
Marx.
Marx's soul.
Zero.
Marx and zero shiping.
0.
Zero two.
Zero2.
02.
0two.
Master hand, crazy hand, and master core. (Master hand and crazy hand appears in kirby and the amazeing mirror. And Hal, the company that made kirby, also made smash brothers. And master core is a part of master hand so... Ya it works.)
Tabuu (agein, master hand verse is connected to kirby 'verse, and smash bros 'verse. And tabuu exists in subspace... Just like master hand.)
Yes?
Yes.
Most definitely.
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I laughed so hard at this comment. I swear, it made my day!
Well, Zero is appearing! One of his forms, at least. (I see Zero Two and Zero as the same person.) And so is Marx. But not together. (
Sorry,butI'maMarxolorshipperalltheway) It wouldn't work for the plot anyway, so...The Super Smash Bros guys probably won't be in this. Maybe Kabu (from the anime), but not the other guys.
Nightmare might have something to do with the sequel (if I even finish this first one...) Galacta Knight, NOVA, and Necrodius will probably be the same. The Squeak Squad are in this one, though. I have something planned for them...
And thank you for commenting! Seeing comments always makes me smile~ X3
Interesting, to say the least. Lots of potential.
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Thank you! :D Hopefully I'll get the motivation to finish writing the next damn chapter like GEEZ Pepdog, get your butt in gear!
Comments always make me smile (and help remind me) so thank you once again! :3
Of course! I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Can I continue your cancelled Kirby story?
Can you continue this story?
6726680 Unfortunately, I must say no to that. I have lost my motivation, can't even remember what the story was about, and frankly don't know where it's meant to head. I apologise, but it's not going to happen.
6730129 You mean this story is cancelled?!?
6731261 Indeed, it seems that is the case.
6732551 Well, might as well put the label on.
6739996 ...No. I doubt anybody else would be reading this, anyway. It's probably lost in the depths of Hell by now. And besides, who are you to tell me what to do with my stories...?
6742387 Sorry. It's just that a few months ago, people check this out, and now, they see it to be cancelled. Plus, your stories are awesome.
6742446 Right; I apologise.
I just don't think people will want to check it out anymore. Since it hasn't been updated in *checks* just under a year, they could probably already assume I wasn't interested anymore...
And, frankly, my MLP stories have be sub-par at best, lately... I just haven't been getting the motivation to continue...
I noticed you ripped a joke from the Lego Movie.
7251408 I did? It's been so long since I've written this and even longer since I watched the Lego Movie that I don't even remember. I probably did though; I love the Lego Movie. Was it the "I'm so sentenced I can't even tired properly" line? Because... I honestly can't remember where I got that from.
aaawwww the first cancelled story. I just wished they would remove dead storys from a group, I hate to found those if I search for storys I want to read, it only takes longer this way.