• Member Since 19th Nov, 2013
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pepdog1


A simple fourteen year old girl writing simple stories simply for the fun of it. Fan of a loooot of video games and cartoons, o you might see me around a lot. I don't post many stories nowadays, tho.

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Fluttershy is a shy, awkward Pegasus who is afraid of her own shadow. Flippy is a war sergeant with PTSD who can kill anybody in an instant. Two very different people. So what happens when Discord does the impossible; switch their minds? I can tell you what...

Twilight and Sniffles go crazy trying to get them back to normal, Rarity and Flaky try to help them fit in, Pinkie Pie and Lumpy try and fail to make them feel safe, Applejack and The Mole succeed at melting their hearts, Splendid and Splendont fight, Rainbow Dash gets into trouble, Lifty and Shifty get rich, the CMC almost die and Discord has a good old laugh. Dear Celestia... When will this end?!

(A Happy Tree Friends and MLP crossover. Rated teen for the occasional swear and a bit of gore. I'm sure you guys can handle that though... Otherwise, why the hell are you watching HTF, let alone reading this?! Anyway.... cover art by meeeee!)

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Comments ( 15 )

FINALLY THIS HAPPENED. You had my curiosity, but now you have my fucking attention. Good job. Although, you did use a little too many ellipses, that's the '...' you shove between words. They are meant to show the speaker trailed off, or there was a brief pause in speech. Thus need to be used sparingly, and in diolouge only.

I'll stick with it, but it's so okay it's average.

good story. is flippy a member of the green beray? and will any ponies die?

4917602 Thank you! I'll take that advice into hoof and put it into action! As soon as I get the right system, that is.


4918452 Thank you too! I think you meant green beret, (which is a kind of hat) but I honestly have no idea what that is so I'm going to have to say no. And I'm not planning for any pony to die. Tree Friends, on the other hand...


4918391 I understand. (Considering my age. I am rather young.) Maybe you could tell me how to improve? Either way, thanks for sticking with the story!

And thank you all for all the feedback and follows after just one day! You guys rock! ^-^

4919418 The green beret is an advaced military force. From what I know, it is as hard to get in to the green beret as it is to get into seal team 6 or black ops

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Green Beret is the name of the United States Army's special forces division. So yes. Flippy is supposed to be a green beret.
I dunno what it is about it, it's just meh.

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SEAL Team Six was destroyed. "black ops" refers to any mission undertaken by a special operations paramilitary group that officially never happened and requires an extreme security clearance to know about.

4920864 that was kinda why I compared the berets to them. Also this is the most feedback I've gotten on a comment.

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Oh. I knew it was some kind of military thing (Due to the "Pink Berets" in Hop, that movie about the Easter Bunny :rainbowwild:) but I wasn't exactly sure. I think Flippy may have been a part of them, although if you've watched the W.A.R. Journal you would've seen that he's a rather bad fighter when he's not flipped out so it's unlikely he would've made it in. Yeah. I'm going to say no to that until Mondo Media shows it officially on their website or in another W.A.R. episode.

And I understand how it could be a bit meh. I sorta slacked off during the part where Twilight enters the house, and it doesn't feel right to me but I don't know how to re-write it. (Also, I have so many other stories to be completing. :facehoof: My conscience is telling me "OLA CONTINUE WITH THAT OTHER STORY OR GO DO YOUR HOMEWORK" but then I'm just "I don't wanna I have too many ideas in my heeeeeead." Yeah. If you know what I mean. If not... ignore this.)

By the way, DJ Psycholoo, I read that story of yours, "Drop", and I really liked it! Keep up the good writing! (Although you might want to work on your tenses. They're hard to pin down. :raritywink:)

Quite the intro for the HTF characters. Wouldn't mind so much, since people who probably haven't seen the show will need to know who's who, but still...
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Also... Never imagined Shifty and Lifty being described as Mexican...

4934732 Thanks... I think? :rainbowhuh: Yeah, there's not many HFT fans here. (On FanFiction however...) The other characters may or may not be getting the same treatment, or at least a short description. (I know Sniffles' intro is going to be something big-ish.) Also, as for Lifty and Shifty being Mexican... I don't know. I just thought it might be cool. Also, their laughs do sound a bit Mexican in the show. (At least to me...) I guess you can hear them how you want to. :pinkiehappy:

I'm glad another of you liked my story. I mean, this is so popular right now I can't even-:applejackconfused: Thank you all! I shall try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can, although I do have quite a lot on my metaphorical plate. :twilightsheepish:

:twilightangry2: DISCORD! Get her back! If you don't, you're gonna turn Equestria into the new bloodbath! Change them back now!

I really didn't want to read this, but I couldn't help myself. But please make more.

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