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TundraStanza


The Poetic Frost makes mistakes so that you don't have to. "Dance, Sode no Shirayuki!"

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It's inevitable that the Cutie Mark Crusaders will eventually succeed in their goal to get pictures on their flanks. What isn't set in stone, however, is the timing. Who will get their mark first? What effect will it leave on those left behind?
The last question is especially difficult on Apple Bloom's conscious. How can she support her friends when she sees visions of fate pulling them apart?
Perhaps the wanderer of dreams can shed some light on the matter.
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Credit for the idea goes to Dr. Wolf.
Drawing belongs to AppleDashed.
MLP:FiM belongs to Hasbro, DHX, and the Discovery Family formerly known as the Hub.
One-shot.

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"The two S-named fillies?" Really.:ajbemused:
Well, otherwise it had a sweet theme.

I was actually rather surprised to see that someone had taken my episode idea and turned into a Fan Fiction. Not sure if that's ever happened before...

Tis good to know that others are enjoying my ideas enough to make the effort to improve upon them.

Nicely done TundraStanza.

Good, but I felt like you were trying to har to be 'clever' as in when Applebllom dream was at an Emmy awards like Sweetie Belle. I'm not saying don't have these nods, but make it your own work, the story will flow much more smoothly for that.

this was an ok story Iiked the idea and how you wrote it was great I just have this feeling inside me that it could have been better dont ask me for specifics because like I said its just this feeling. But good job

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