This story is a sequel to Agent Con Mane in Doctor Ironhoof (Under Revision)
Donut Joe, also known as Mane6 Agent Con Mane, is once again forced out of retirement when Roseluck, a pony from the Griffon Nest, land conquered by the Griffon Kingdom’s empire, says that she will defect to Equestria and deliver to them the Griffon’s Grimoire, a magical spell book that can control the Griffons’ expanding Storm Cloud. Her one condition is that Agent Con Mane be the one to smuggle her out. MARE recognizes this as an obvious trap but sends in Joe anyway in order to get the Grimoire. What they don’t know is that the ones behind the trap are the criminal organization known as DISCORD, who are attempting to pit Equestria and the Griffons against each other. Joe must deal with not only SkyClaw, the Griffons’ specialized military, but also the agents of DISCORD that hide in the shadows, including an anonymous pony with a heart filled completely with chaos.
And so it begins...no dumb rookie villain getting his flank killed in training, sadly, but Rook's introduction more than made up for it.
Speaking of which, DUDE, YOU NAMED A PONY BOND VILLAIN ROOK. NightFire is my all-time favorite Bond game! I'm going to be thinking of that Rook's voice here. XD
This anti-Element naming scheme, though, I like. I wonder who 'Loyalty' and 'Laughter' turn out to be.
One last thing: “Wall that could be true…” ‘Magic’ pondered aloud. “...What else?”
^Wall should be While.
Text box was giving me shenanigans on my phone for pasting the quote, so I needed a separate one to stop the pasting from deciding to mess up my comments. XD
5153218 typo fixed. Thanks.
-I felt that Red Grant's training scene wouldn't be translated well in this format. Especially considering the direction I'm going to be taking the character I felt there was a better way to introduce him.
-As for 'Loyalty' and 'Laughter' you'll just have to wait and find out. And the identity of 'Magic' is a closely guarded secret. Needless to say I've planned everything out and I have quite a few surprising revelations hidden up my sleeve.
Well, it wouldn't be a James Bond pastiche without a dash of that good old-fashioned sexism.