Hello, I'm The Doctor, and before you ask it's just the Doctor. I'm a Time Lord, an advance race from the planet Gallifrey, located in the farthest reaches of the universe. I've saved the universe from galactic forces that have tried to take it for their own reasons, and I've made so many wonderful friends. But now, I've been alone for hundreds of years, and everyone I knew has disappeared, left me without a trace in a blink of an eye. Just when I thought I had died, I wake up to discover a new marvel. "I'm an equine... Wot?!"
Disclaimer: this is set in the beginning of season 1 of My little pony: Friendship is magic.
The cover was made by MyLittleSheepy
Mlp FIM is owned by Hasbro and Doctor Who is owned by BBC, all rights belong to them.
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There is a lot of Exposition, yes, but ultimately a good story! Well written, and though I've never watched an episode with Romana in it, I like the way you portrayed the pairing. I can ship this!
The writing was kind of stiff, but you did well for your first story! I look forward to more!
Edit: Personally, if you want inspiration for how to write large chunks of exposition well, look to Lemony Snicket, though that style of writing probably won't go well with a Doctor Who story.
I liked it. You did a good introduction. Sad that Donna isn't included, she's one of my favorite companion along with Rory Williams.
Definitely weating for more.
6542667 Actually, remember when Romana saw the TARDIS seemingly go through the data of the Doctor's previous adventures and companions, there's a reason for that. I won't try to say what it means, but let's just say the Doctor will be quite surprised on what, or who, he finds.
As a Doctor Who fan I'm liking how this is going so far.
Good going in the back story. Hope you continue the story love to hear where you go with it
6545186 Oh I will, in fact, I'm working on the next chapter right now. It might take a while, but I promise it will come.
6542483 Fun Fact: Tom Baker and the actress who played Romana II got engaged, ergo explaining the feelings they had for each other in the show.
N...not that line...
NOT THAT LINE!!!!
6583745 Finally, someone caught the reference I made there. There's a reason why I had her say that line, but you'll have to read later chapters to see why.
6583842 Well I only caught it due to my super love (in a fan way) of David Tennant that I caught it. Plus it was one of the most heart breaking moments for me. Also can't wait for more of this story.
It should be "h ttp://www.youtube.com" not "h ttps://m.youtube.com"
6842745 Sorry about that
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Sooo..... The short description said "Knight of time and space."
Is this... Perhaps... A reference to Homestuck?
7052332 reference to Doctor Whooves and Assistant.
7054983 well, yeah, I kinda get that, I was just saying...
"Knight of Time" is a Homestuck thing. Dave Strider to be specific. Knight of Space is another potential GodTier within the comic, so...
Y'know what, nevermind...
7054995 no, go on, I'm interested.
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See this page. Look for my comment, specifically at the links provided therein.
Interesting. Overall.
I admit, I'm not great with crossovers. They tend to really confuse me.
I've got Doctor Whooves and several characters based on the Doctor Who franchise in my fics but I've got them as the 'Equestrian-Equivalent' of Doctor Who and nothing to do with his humanoid-reality.
But I like how you've portrayed them overall.
It's a bit fast-moving for everyone to show up then disappear but I suppose it sets the scene.
Overall, as I said, interesting and I look forward to finding out how this happened and why.
8173191 thanks
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