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What if one morning you discovered that you weren't the same pony you were the day before?

Applejack has the same problem to deal with when she awakens as a ten year old filly. But this is the least of her problems when she finds out her younger sibling, Apple Bloom has been afflicted with the same curse and now is twenty years old.

"Being ten can't be that bad," She thought.

Little did she know that she would be eating her words by the end of the day, that is if she lasts that long.


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This is awesome but for some reason I feel that I have read this chapter before... :applejackunsure:

Applejack: Temporary Cutie Mark Crusader.

I wonder how AJ react when she find out she had to back to school again?

5027416 I wrote this before. I just re-uploaded it.

5035246 OH! ok that makes sense lol

I wasnt expecting mac and granny to know something was up. i honestly thought this would either be a fic where only bloom and aj remembered that their roles were reversed or that only aj would remember.

Felt a bit rushed for my reading taste. The story was so far ok. Even tough it felt more like the storys bare bones instead of an story, its missing elaborations, realistic reactions and natural pasing

5041391 Okay, thanks for the feedback. I will revise a few things later on. :twilightsmile:

Awww but you were so good at making stories :fluttershysad:

5092775 My stories were awful.

5092790 :pinkiegasp: they were not they were awesome :rainbowdetermined2:

5092795 Why would you say that? I don't think that they were.

5092823 Well.. you might not think they were but I think that in this case it is a matter if opinion, now I'm not forcing you to continue I would never do that to somebody, I'm just encouraging its completely up to you, BUT! I like your stories and I know others do because you have 138 followers with just 3 stories! AND with those three stories I have seen absolutely NO thumbs down... If you ask me I think that is totally beyond impressive :rainbowderp:. (I am sorry if any of this made you feel bad :twilightoops:)

5092842 I don't know. I just don't see it these stories never seemed to have any chance.

But thanks for the pep talk :twilightsmile:

5092853 Your welcome I'm always there for people but.... good luck for upcoming... stuff I guess :twilightsheepish: If you ever want to talk I'm here :twilightsmile:

5092860 Thank you for that.

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