"If I was an oven creator, I would label the knobs 'FRONT' and 'BACK.' Not a tiny diagram of how to fuck yourself." ~Austin "Chef" Dickey
Rainbow Blitz lives a normal, egotistical, musical life. That is, of course, except for his love of Lightning Dust. When Blitz starts acting weird, a pony confronts him, asking him what's up. Who is that pony? Lightning Dust.
An experimental one-shot to see if ponies will tolerate my stories and such.
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Well bud, we can't speak for the other ponies on this site, but we think you hit it out of the park with this story. Especially if this is a rushed job. Some of the bad words were a bit unnecessary in our opinion but that would be our only gripe.
You did good. Be proud.
4955891 Well, thanks! I'm glad to know somepony out there likes my story as much as you do! I don't think I kept Lightning particularly in-character, but hey, we have one episode to go off of. I admit the swearing was a bit excessive, but the behavior of Rainbow Blitz is up to the fan since he's not canon, and I depict him as kind of a sir-swears-a-lot.
Thanks for the review! I'm happy you like it!
6257497 Truth be told, it's not well written. There are an overusage of swears and everything happens for Blitz just so easy.